All of your stories have surprised me, but always in a good way. The scene of Riley trying to pick up Kate is pitch perfect; and Graham's explosion over them sharing their personal angst while awaiting the arrival of the vampires is classic.

Riley and Forrest would do their macho posturing but Graham always wanted to cut to the chase.

That was hilarious.

Wonderful dialogue you had with those three. I couldn't stop laughing anytime they were all talking to (at?) each other.

Damn. Anyone who can put my two VERY least favorite characters (Riley and Kate) in a fic and still leave me loving it has a high spot in my mind. You have a major talent, Mike. -Bunny

This was a really fun read. You have a knack for writing snappy, funny dialogue that fits the characters. The "I wasn't his girlfriend" conversation between Riley and Kate had me chuckling throughout, and I loved Graham's uncharacteristic but well-deserved outburst. Very enjoyable story.

Well done. I was worried about how you'd make the connection to Angel, but you did it in a truly inspired way, with the third party providing the 'cynical voice of the audience' we've come to expect in Buffy/Angel shows.

Fun.
... Though you might want to add a line about "Kate's" misguided attempt to become a "stockbroker." :)

Very creative story - I liked it.