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BellaTallin 3/6/12 . chapter 1
*sniffle* Loved this and this line especially -

"It is just as well, then, as my heart has already been given, and surely you don't have room in there for two…"

That's something my husband and I say to each other, that I have his heart in me and he has mine in him. :-)

Beautiful!
Alexa1993 12/28/11 . chapter 1
BloomingViolet 2/5/11 . chapter 1
Oh so cute! I love it! You ended it very well. I liked that you made it into something more than just about sex. Thanks for posting!
MiaKulpa 10/10/10 . chapter 1
Eeep, I love it. Tender, sexy, sensual, lovely. Yay. Another wonderful piece. Love your way with words. :)
Neeps513 1/10/10 . chapter 1
Aw! I especially like the ending!
dapperyklutz 8/31/08 . chapter 1
that was wicked...
zule bean 8/24/08 . chapter 1
Absolutely perfect!
Megan Consoer 7/14/08 . chapter 1
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
weasel87 6/9/08 . chapter 1
Aww. Truly remarkable story, was really good. I thought it was a bit cheesy at the end with the comments about the heart's but it fitted in well with it I think. I got confused when Snape went from on top of her to lying next to her, I didn't understand how it happened, but good :)

Stacey
Laikensmom 4/7/08 . chapter 1
Wow! This story was really beautiful!

“Far be it from me to keep my lady waiting…” I loved that line. The Severus Snape I always envision always says things smooth like that. Just really remarkable story. It was well written and like I said before was really beautiful!
My Dusty 4/5/08 . chapter 1
This story was incredibly sweet and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great Job!
Ratdog 4/4/08 . chapter 1
I love Hermione/Severus, and that was just brilliant. Are you planning on continuing this?
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