Jeepers, I just have a feeling things are about to get complicated! Keep posting!

keep it up.

I like this muchly - your writing has an extremely intelligent tone that lends such volatile subject matter an enormous credibility. Well done!

Two tiny things:

“Do you realize that we got the most..." probably should be "we *have* got".

"I wondered if her obvious talent..." - I think the Doc Manager ate some of your words there...it's been doing that to me too, so don't feel badly. *kicks Doc Manager*

You'll please forgive me, but am I incredibly dense or did I miss something in a previous chapter (I apologise if I did, and disregard this if so) - but why do they ocasionally refer to the Lady (she is a lady? or no?) sometimes in a male sense? Sorry if I'm just forgetful if you already explained. Thanks!

Great chapter - you've obviously done an enormous amount of research, and I congratulate you on a job well done.

"under the pen-name of Arthur Conan Doyle." Oh, how witty, very good! And the idea of add a new prologue IMHO is a very suitable decision. Well done, and i can't wait to read an update.

Absolutely fantastic, thank for the update. Now, to the prologue.

Thanks for the message - I checked the story and was like, I already read this chapter...should've checked all 3 chappies.

Anyhow, I'm glad you added a preface, it adds to the authenticity very much. This line,

"You, who has found the legacy of one who had to be named a “Boswell” however, should now know the truth from my very own hands which I trusted to these pages read and known by no-one else before who was not familiar with the complete facts of the matters of the families of Holmes, Watson and last but not least the House of Llewellyn of Anglesey indeed."

puzzled me a bit; it was a little hard to understand at least to me, in one long sentence.

However, your Watson voice is getting better and better - this really sounded like him. Great job, and I look forward to more!

i think you may have already published this chapter. still good one.

Hah! Another Sherlock Holmes horror fic! I love these...And yours is admirably done. Good preface!
*You, who has found the legacy of one who had to be named a “Boswell” however, should now know the truth from my very own hands which I trusted to these pages read and known by no-one else before who was not familiar with the complete facts of the matters of the families of Holmes, Watson and last but not least the House of Llewellyn of Anglesey indeed.*
This sentence is a little confusing...
*anyone will believe it anyway*
I believe that should be "in any case/event".
*runs off to read more*
Er..do you mean the Azores islands, by any chance?:-)

Pre-review: Sorry my dear, yet busy, tomorrow the "real" review (Thank for update)

salve (latin for hi)! I am a bigger fan of Anne Rice's Vampires so eugh! (latin for alas ect), but this is still a good story. apolgisies if any of the words are spelt incorrectly, I don't have a dictionary to hand, so must cope from memory.

Hmm, rather against my will you're very much intriguing me with the vampire lore - and that's hard to do, so well done indeed!

Your Victoriana is even better in this chapter, nicely executed. I have to say poor Watson is so very very forgiving and forgetting; love the dear chap...

Continue soon, please!

Sorry, my dear, i read this yesterday at first glance, and today i reread. Well, now, more deeply i read, more i liked. I agree with KCS, the atmosphera is excellent, and H & W are perfectly in character.
PS: No problems for me with the language, because i speak only Spanish, but i understand English; of course, i enjoy immensely your work. Thank for sharing, and please, update soon.

as a fan of Vampires of Anne Rice (*not that i suggest any simalrity,) i watch this story with interest. Please do not disappoint.

Hey, i liked this, please update.

I'm having a problem with this part:
*
Holmes darted his eyes to me. “I doubt it. The current titleholder is a woman of twenty-five years, according to Burke’s and Debrett’s.”

“Wait, our guest IS a woman of circa twenty-five years!”
*

Never known Sherlock to miss such an important detail like that.