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| missypaige06 2008-06-25 ch 5,  | abusethanks for the great update. the chapter was brilliant, love the rivalry and phoebe being phoebe lol. cant wait to read more. i thought it was cole who was the spy but now im not so sure. it would be a great twist if it was coop or kyle or bane or omg - it has to be DAN that'd be great. hope you update soon :) |
| Ramona 2008-06-23 ch 5, anon. | abuseYeah, I agree with Joleca! Get rid of that dumb Coop :) Cole is better, and he has to be with Phoebe here. Make him risk his life for her because he is great as a hero :) |
| peterpan27 2008-06-23 ch 5, | abusehuh intresting...Is Paige gonna freak out at school again or something? |
| charmedchick34 2008-06-23 ch 5, | abusewell i would say it's cole! but i guess that's too obvious! :P! |
| CharmedNeptune47 2008-06-23 ch 4, | abusereally cool story, update soon please |
| Cancer-Chris 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseNice work. Love the way you have written everything but the chapters could stand to be a little longer. Keep up the great work. |
| peterpan27 2008-06-01 ch 4, | abuseokay weired story but i like it |
| littlemissbad 2008-06-01 ch 4, | abusegreat chapter |
| Crazy-Elf-Person 2008-06-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love it! I really hope that it turns into Leo/Piper, Coop/Phoebe, Andy/Prue, and Paige/Henry. LOL, call me names, but I can't write fanfiction if they don't have those pairings. I think it's a really good story, though! Keep up the good work! |
| missypaige06 2008-06-01 ch 4, | abuseloved it. cant wait to see what happens. great paige chapter - more please :) |
| Eye-Of-The-Hurricane 2008-06-01 ch 4, | abuseNice UD :D |
| Joleca 2008-06-01 ch 4, | abuseGood to see a new chapter. Thinking maybe there was something else in that can than just beer.. and please, please don't make Cole evil (someone else maybe, but not Cole.. he really deserves a chance to be the good soul he really is deep inside).. and please get rid of Coop (you can always make him evil ;) |
| missypaige06 2008-05-15 ch 3, | abusewow great update. you didnt sleep with a nerd did you - lol, love it |
| littlemissbad 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abusetht was a GREAT chapter, and way to go prue, i mean tht was one serious scene right there great job! |
| Eye-Of-The-Hurricane 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseHey- this a great story and really well written , except that you keep muddeling up the tenses which is slightly confusing. But meh, minor detail- great job!! :-D |