I think that you did a good job at capturing the dreams within dreams, the truth within the lies, or Sarah had forced herself back onto the other side inadvertently leaving Jareth, the others, and possibly her true self behind.

But it's only a dream, right?

wow..

I dont think i can say anything else.

its wonderful, but sad.

Just wow

beautifuly done

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Mazz

Oh, I understood that after the end. That was cool, and I liked it a lot.

I really like this idea. I love little vignettes, tantalising ideas, 'what ifs' that swirl around like dust.

Heheheheheheh! A demented Jareth fashioned a music box girl in a bubble world and fell for her? Cool!

*sniffles* that was really good, I very nice, sad though, twist. I would love to see more of this too! you have some great ideas!

It's kinda sad...but I like it.

continue please

Wow, very clever! An interesting take, and you wrote it very well.

*pauses* Becky! My goodness, that was wonderful! Wow... Yikes! *shivers* That's really...deep, lol. Wow... *shivers again*