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rainbow spell
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
aw...so sweet!! :) SAUSAKU RULES!
iUchibi
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful, my mind is overloaded. I'm just stunned into stupor, it's amazing.
Obsenity
2009-06-27 . chapter 1
Neji and Hinata as matchmakers, hehe. I'm not too fond of this pairing, but I enjoyed reading your story. It was well written and paced and they were in character, which is always nice.
zanibarr
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
Uhm. I suck at giving reviews (forgive me), but I'm willing to try for this one.

While I was reading this story, I was getting sparks from my head down to my toes. It was just so real. I mean, I don't even know how to describe this. You added the details so digustingly well (and I love ugly details). Personally, I think you potrayed all the characters perfectly.

It's just so imperfect, but true. It's beautiful. I think you did a spectacular story with this. Great job.

-zanibarr
lulu halulu
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
cute story
sonia
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
cute story, love it!
hope it will happen...
thanks! Always enjoy a good Sasuke- Sakura Story.
the blanket
2008-10-30 . chapter 1
Very nice. :)
deity of death1
2008-10-15 . chapter 1
I read this many times before, but it's still so beautiful.
the tomato
2008-08-22 . chapter 1
nejiten is vey cute when theyre trying to be matchmakers i like this story alot
CrazyGirlofManyNames
2008-06-04 . chapter 1
Who knew Neji would be such a good matchmaker? Very cute, lovely.
ish.the.abstract
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
brilliantly written, great grammar and characterization, nice concept and writing style...i so love it
Bandana Bandit
2008-05-23 . chapter 1
Simply one of the most beautiful things i have ever read.

-RLO
Neitzarr
2008-05-12 . chapter 1
It was a happy ending, but seemed like such a sad story.
But it was sweet.
Hinata and Neji, they could start a match making business.

You did a great job. It twas awesome.
extraordinaire
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
Aw! That was so cute! Like, for serious, I can't stand all those 'Sasuke comes back and falls for Sakura' fanfictions since they're so overdone. But sincerely, this one was flippin' awesome! And I loved when Neji was just like 'I can so be a matchmaker if I wanted to'. It was the perfect mix of drama, romance, humor, friendship and just plain awesomeness!
ivory sails
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
Wow, this is very good. I love Neji and Hinata's not-really help in sort of setting the two up. Good job :)
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