 katinacup 2008-04-21 . chapter 9 beautiful, Epilogue,I'm hoping for more stories soon. thanks, Kat... |
 janglyspur 2008-04-20 . chapter 9Such beautiful imagery you ladies are able to evoke with so few words! And I had myself a feeling that ol Barton wasn't dead. I have enjoyed this story immensely, and loved seeing Matt Dillon's romantic side. Great job again ladies! Look forward to more stories from both of you. :) |
 rjkelley58 2008-04-20 . chapter 9As good as I remembered it. Great job guys!
Robin |
 kittyfanatic 2008-04-19 . chapter 8 I just wanted to let all of you know how appreciative I am (I'm sure Amanda would echo my sentiments) for all of the feedback on our little story. It began as a challenge on a Yahoo group and grew to what you have seen here. We had a blast writing it. Amanda is wonderful as beta -- being an English major obviously helps. Thanks so much for going along for the ride. Wendy |
 katinacup 2008-04-19 . chapter 8 Wendy and Amamda, wonderful job, well done, I loved the part where Matt and Kitty are lying in the back of the wagon, and discovered how the other really felt about thier love, and fears for each other. And Doc being Doc, well thats just sweet grouchy Doc. Now to thier night on the balcony, HOT,HOT,HOT, I loved the exchange between them, words and other wize. Again very good story, You had me captivated throughout all eight chapers, and even though I hate to see the story end. I cant wait for the Epilogue. thanks, Kat... |
 Kathleen Russell 2008-04-18 . chapter 8Bravo, job well done. And as a fan of Poe and Byron, I was quite surprised to see it used so elegantly. One hell of a job.
Kathleen Russell |
 Dakota Kid 2008-04-18 . chapter 8hello ladies. another beautiful chapter. I do have to say that this really was a beautiful story despite it's somewhat creepy beginging. i loved seeing the romantic side of matt dillon and of course a little smut never killed anyone either. i will be looking forward to your epilogue. |
 TygerMoon Foxx 2008-04-18 . chapter 8The English teacher and literature lover in me really enjoyed this unique twist on several old favorites. I've seen other adaptations of Poe but this is among the best. I don't know if you guys did it on purpose, but there's a dark humor running through the whole thing which is just delightful.
Also, good job on the seemless effort. I couldn't tell which writer did what parts. |
 control alt delete 2008-04-16 . chapter 7Mahc: This is an unusual and interesting story. Very different than the other ff stories I've read. I like it! |
 Dakota Kid 2008-04-16 . chapter 7you gals sure do have a way with words! you are able to convey a lot of emotion with out getting overly wordy which i find to be a very good thing. I also like how you in the end of chapter 7 you gave matt and kitty a glimpse into what the other goes through. |
 janglyspur 2008-04-16 . chapter 7You ladies amaze me yet again with this chapter. So sweet and heartfelt...made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :) I love that they stopped and laid in the wagon and looked at the sky, a lot of times the simplest pleasures are the best. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
 katinacup 2008-04-14 . chapter 6 BAMM..You two ladies have succeded in writing a very exciting story.
it's got everything, love, insanity, a hero,the last minute escape. Great,great, story.I cant wait for more. thanks so much, Kat... |
 ingary 2008-04-14 . chapter 6So, let's see, we've got The Cask of Amontillado, Annabel Lee, The Telltale Heart, and The Fall of the House of Usher. Am I missing anything?
Thank goodness they're both (mostly) okay! Please write more soon! |
 janglyspur 2008-04-14 . chapter 6You ladies sure don't disappoint! I had wondered where that gun had gotten to ;) I thought that there was a tornado and was scared when Matt and Kitty went outside...but thankfully it seems that it was just the wind knocking the old house down. I see a TBC at the end here and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
 janglyspur 2008-04-13 . chapter 5Another creepily crafted chapter ladies! You had me scooting closer and closer to the edge of my seat until I finally fell off! Now I need to go sit on some ice, and try to calm my breathing because of that last sentence! More soon please! :) |