hurry up with chapter 2 on tension !

:P u should totally continue this. ur continuing right? yes u r.

I really enjoyed reading that. You descrided the action scenes well and for some reason I can actually imagine Zuko studying other bending forms and trying to use them in Firebending. Katara's 'death threat' was funny too!
Very well written! :)

nice!

So Cool! Me likey. Adding to favs, still don't know why I'm telling u this...Oh well.

That was Aang earthbending, right? And will you make a Pride and Prejudice based fic of ATLA?

very nicely done.

She should totally be sparring with him again and Toph "accidentally" earthbends them into a very compromising position... and their lips just happen to meet...

OKay, your note before the story made me crack up hysterically, and heck there's probably going to be some more story 'arcs' in Avatar. I defintely could never be a Katannger, 14 and 12 is a little too weird especially when the 14 year old is very mature and like a mother to the childlike 12 year old. Cute story too.

Amazing Chapter! I loved the fight scene! Zuko definitely is one powerful bender... LONG LIVE ZUTARA!

Great story, I loved it! I think my favorite part was Katara's reaction to “Just that Zuko is one powerful-” lol really great ;)

Awsome story.

Pride and Prejudice? Word of advice, only read it when you have a nice big pot of caffeinated coffee at hand. ;) Now that I think of it, it is kind of connected to Zutara. But it's boring.

Anyways, great story! Zuko is a very powerful [(*cough* and sexy *cough cough gag hack*) where did that come from? ;)] bender! The fight scene was amazing, (nice touch with Zuko and the fire like Toph and the dust), and Katara's funny. LOL. Jeez that's girl's seriously gotta chill.

Awesome story! If you weren't already working on another story I'd demand another chapter, but I kinda want to see the end of Into the Darkness. ;)

PEACE OUT!
VC

Your story was nice, and about the "Pride and Prejudice" both Katara and Zuko hold some similarities to Elizbeth and Mr.Darcy. Katara and Elizbeth are the Prejuice, remember "Jet" she thought of him as a hero, "The Great Divide" she takes a side without listening to the other side. And "Crossroad of Destiny" while she was yelling at Zuko.

Zuko like Mr. Darcy, is the Pride for obvious reasons. If Katara and Zuko could put aside their "Pride and Prejudice" they could find in the other a wonderful person that they could fall for.

lol i rly liked this one ^_^ i thought it was hilarious when Katara loses her temper and Zuko's all like '...'

liked this one... i think you should make another aprt to it ^_^ tho i dunno what it could be about...

when are you gonna post the other one?