omg that was ...was,...** AWSOME MORE PLEASE!

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just...

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wow, this was really very good. creepy, twisted, but brilliant.
L being beaten by BB.
i never thought i would read something like that, but god ot was good.

Oh!Cool!Is there gonna be a sequel?*gives you big puppy dog eyes*Pwease?

Aw poor L! D:
It makes me all the more dissapointed in myself that I enjoy this stuff *sighs*
-daxterandboxer-

I'm glad I have this to read while waiting for you to update Broken English. I loved it! I do hope you update B E soon.

Wow, that was really good. I recently found Broken English, so I'm reading it now.

This is a great story, but i did have onre recommendation: It was sometimes hard to followw who did what because of all of all of the 'he's nd 'him's, etc. The next time ou do something like this, try to put the names in a little more.

Still, it was great. Now I'm off to finish reading BE.

Ah youu... That was ** perfect. How you do that...~

Loved it.

Wow.

You portrayed B beautifully. My goodness, you've really made him deranged. This certainly explains a lot from Broken English.

This was really good, too. I think this is the most sadistic I've ever seen Beyond, and wow, just wow. So, you said that this was a roleplay between you and your friend, right? Who's L and who's Beyond? And, I always thought that L's real name was 'L Lawliet', not 'L Lawliette'. Maybe I'm wrong, but that's just how I've always seen it written.

Anyway, like I said in my review for Broken English, I REALLY need to get Another Note, and I want it so much. Oh well, I guess I'll have to buy it sometime.

Can't wait for Broken English to update, though I know it might be a while, since you updated yesterday.

poor Lawliet!

I rather enjoyed this, I just read 'Another note: the los angelos BB murder cases' and now reading this... I like yours better, but that book was so good too... But still I think your BB was better!

Oh my God!! Beyond is a frikin monster! Poor L! The writing was beautiful (as usual), but my imagination is gonna give me nightmares about this for days! lol! Keep up the good work!

I love these types of stories.