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The Celestial Tiger
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
I think this is my favorite so far. Masterfully written and beautifully characterized. I can totally see this being in an episode of the show.

Highest regards,
The Celestial Tiger
Ladyhawke 620
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
Nice embellishment of their first meeting. Enjoyed your work.
MaryRose
2008-05-01 . chapter 1
Good and plausible introduction the the way their relationship would develop in the series.
Gyreflight
2008-04-29 . chapter 1
Oh! I remember this one - I read it a few years ago on fkfanfic...and it made enough of an impression that I still remember it fondly. I even remembered the title when I saw it here.

It's interesting to look at the very early days of the Nick-Nat connection, before knowledge, certainty and assumptions attach to everything.

I liked the way you played out Nick's impressions and reactions to and about Nat, and his line about having known some very argumentative dead made me smile.

Nat's line: "I'll bet you could have chased me off if you really applied yourself; I'm probably not that unflappable," also stood out, both as a point of fact and as a good piece of characterisation - that she would realise it, that she would face Nick with it, and that she'd do it with that mix of truth and self-deprecating sideways humour.

Lovely to see this again and to discover both that you're still writing (as I notice from your profile), and that you're putting some of the earlier pieces back into circulation.

Thanks for the re-post and the reminder.

~Gyre
Hal
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
Thoroughly enjoyed this, will be back to read your other stories.
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