Reviews for You Can Make More Money With a Flop

Reviews For: You Can Make More Money With a Flop

musicalsarelife 2008-06-29 ch 15,	abuseWell, I'm definitely enjoying this. Though I can't really believe that Mr. Marks was ever as horrible as in the first few chapters. when Leo kissed Max (chapter 5 right?) it was very sweet. I could see that happening. I love the parts with Carmen and Roger! Love those two. Anyway good job, please keep writing this.
The Chica of Avenue X 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseVery very good!
Twilightwicked5678 2008-06-14 ch 12,	abuseOOH! A long chapter! It was great. The ending cracked me up! Write more. It's nice to have an actual producers story here.
Irish Avalon 2008-06-08 ch 12,	abuseoh...leo is in Ulla-la-la-la-LOVE! :)) (btw, when i read 'nessa' i remembered nessarose from wicked. haha! nothing bad, i just remembered her :D) i loved this chapter (maybe because i like it when i can 'get into someone's head' when they fall in love. still, even words in writing can't describe the feeling until you feel it for yourself. now don't go thinking im a romantic! :)) i forbid thee to think thus! ;) anyway, i'll have to apologize for this but i'll leave this story on alert. schoolwork is once again about to bombard me and i will be extremely busy, so no fanfiction reading for a long time to come :( unless i find time, of course :D which would be every few weeks :-L but anyway, i love this story and im not going to stop reading it. just consider me idle for the next few weeks and so on :) happy writing, and take care! ~Irish Avalon
Irish Avalon 2008-06-05 ch 11,	abuse'I met a girl only a little while later who stole my heart away, and I doubt that I’ll ever get it back.' ah, loved it! :D oh, and just a tiny 'btw,' i think you meant to say 'Messrs bialystock and bloom' :)
Irish Avalon 2008-06-03 ch 10,	abusei wanna know what happens when they meet 'renowned theatrical directress roger de bris' :)) i loved this chapter! :)) worth the same laughs as watching the musical itself :D and i've never thought i'd see such accuracy when i read the german phrases (im talking about the spelling ;) ) brilliant! and by the way, about your last review reply, don't feel bad :D i liked the 'accidental' twists anyway, and insulting the Germans is part of the script. mel brooks is Jewish so we should consider that too ;) there was chinese food in the background? well someone has sharp eyes ;) oh, and another thing, i was wondering if you called leo Jewish because matthew broderick's Jewish too :D
Irish Avalon 2008-06-02 ch 9,	abusei wonder if you've heard about this but though i love the producers, i look up to the germans :) it's because (as written on TIME mag) germany has planned to put up a memorial for all those who died in the holocaust of world war 2. it's for those innocent and who were tormented by the nazis. i can't quote the writer's exact words but he said something like people should just realize that the germans have accepted their history and have willed themselves to actually put up a memorial from their own 'shame' in history :) anyway, my real review. i'm pleased at your effort to twist the story a bit. like the play closed on page 3 instead of 4, max threw leo a script instead of leo 'brat-ishly' grab another script, and all that. not too many writer's around here would do that, in fear of some reviews saying something like "what the hell are you doing with the story?! it's supposed to follow the original play-" and the sermon goes on :D but then, if we were to follow the original writing it would be TOTAL plagiarism. absolutely no FANfiction at all, and we'd end up in jail instead of rio ;) i admire you for what you've done here :D and btw, you are always welcome for reviews, as i am thanked for it :D
Irish Avalon 2008-05-27 ch 8,	abuseaw...no reviews? allow ME! :)) cute line from leo in that last part. i guess i would've done the same thing HAHA. :D :D 
Irish Avalon 2008-05-04 ch 6,	abusehere's a trivia, i have a relative who needed a security blanket (but he didnt go hysterical and all. haha!) and only got rid of it when he got a fiance and married. :) not so ridiculous ;) nice writing, btw!
Irish Avalon 2008-04-25 ch 5,	abuseit's getting to the good part :)) i wonder if max will write about how freaked out he was with leo's 'minor compulsion' :))
Irish Avalon 2008-04-20 ch 4,	abuseeh...yeah, whatever you've been reading, dont read them again. i hope you'd appreciate constructive criticism? -i know mr. marks is a horrible jackass but i dont think he's in the mind to doing such a thing to leo...i dont know...it just doesnt seem right :) nothing personal! happy writing, ill be waiting here for your update :)
Vera 2008-04-19 ch 4, anon.	abuseAww! I can't wait til Max and Leo meet.
Irish Avalon 2008-04-19 ch 3,	abusethat actually does sound like the "must-be-the-reason" behind the flopped funny boy :)
Irish Avalon 2008-04-18 ch 2,	abuseaww, i want to give him a hug...
Irish Avalon 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abusepoor max :)) id love to hear leo's thoughts, so far far you've done well in capturing max's :D keep it up!

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