for some reason I think your too bloody good at writing! This is so beautiful, and yet reflects the sadness and pain Nuriko must feel. Another perfect fic (well more so poem _;), Write More!

K-K-KIRI! *glomp* My, my...quite a flood of fics you've got here, ne? :P If I had time to look over them all right now, I would...but...erm...well, there's this little Japanese recitation thing in half an hour and, well...missing it would be back. -.-;; But, anyway...glad to see you reappearing here on ff.net. Ah, and perhaps I should also comment on the fic ITSELF. *sweatdrop* I've often found that poetry fics don't always receive quite the reception that they should, although I really don't understand that, as they take SHORTER to read than fics and are often much simpler to find something to say about...but...er...that's okay. _. I very much enjoyed this little poem, of course because it was about Nuriko *sniffle*...and also because I think it summarizes very well how he must feel by the end of things with Hotohori, etc. The last line, for some reason, really sticks out for me (and not just because there are a few extra spaces before it *sweatdrop*)...it's one of those things that you can just cringe inwardly at. Och, poor Nuriko. *sob* But...er...anyway. :) Bye-bye. :) Ryuen