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Reviews for: A Man Made of Clay Maraverse
eset
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
I know it's unlikely that this review will lead to faster postings, but PLEASE write more. I wanna know what happens to Sammy and Mara and JB and what happens when Peaches gets un-grounded and finds out and if Jordy comes back (does it make me a bad person if I hope he doesn't? I mean, losing someone is one thing, but regaining and losing and regaining and losing is so much worse, and Mara needs to move on with her life at some point, right?)

Anyhow, good story, post more, and your spelling/editing has gotten way better on the last few than it was by the end of Requiem.
John Doe
2009-03-29 . chapter 1
I just read the your entire maraverse over the last couple of days, including all the side stories. I just sat down, read, and couldn't stop. Your series is amazing and I really hope you continue it to the end if there is one.

One comment I have to make though is with the recent characterization of Mara. She started out as a stubborn fighter full of dedication but in your later stories she seems to be too willing to take a backseat to others and run away from her problems.

I know that all the tragedy that's happend has to take their tole but Mara seems like the kind of person that will bounce back and fight against her problems instead of just wallowing in them.

Looking forward to the next installment
Krissytina616
2009-02-19 . chapter 1
please continue soon!
AngelinaChaser7
2008-12-31 . chapter 1
Hey I just stumbled onto ur maraverse a couple of days ago and found it quite enjoyable. I've laughed and cried and everything else in between. Eventhough u have not got many reviews, i do hope u continue with ur story. At the moment I like how Bruce and Sammy are working together and would like to see where u take the story too next. I see ur writing has also improved greatly as i read through each part as well. Hopefully u will continue.
Batman Fan
2008-08-28 . chapter 1
Yes! You have continued this story line. I can't wait for the next chapter. Love it!
Hephaestus01
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
I almost had a stroke when I saw that you continued this series. I have absolutely loved every angst filled moment from the very first published story. Please continue writing this series, the characterizations are excellent. I actually read a few stories twice, and I never do that. Keep up the good work, I am enthralled.
Gary
2008-04-07 . chapter 1
Yay! You are so ebil for making us wait so long.
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