Beautiful. Please write a sequel!

Wow; nice. Love the angst..love everything. A fine job!

This part...

Until one night, when he fucked it all up.

Literally.

In his defense, she could have said no.

killed me...lol.

Beautiful and intense story even if it's a little bit sad.

Why it's a oneshot?

It's got all the ingredients to make a great multiple chapters fic.

I almost cry

Beutiful

OK so the last few lines were a bit final... I was hoping you could be persuaded to lengthen this piece. I really enjoyed it and I hoped there'd be more...