Cute and sad. I hope you continue this.
-Kate

wow that was a really good first chapter! i cant wait for your next update! i really hope your able to update soon!:D

~Rain Addict_CM

i liked it a lot. Good background and i thought a good choice of maiden name for Anne. Overall well done. I noticed a few confused sentences here and there but nothing overwhelming. Thanks and i hope to see more.

Interesting start here. I'm wondering where you're planning on taking this one. ^_^ And I hope to see more soon!

I only can say AWESOME!

I like this, exceptionally written so far.

I've already bugged you with tentacle monster jokes... so I'll just say it's an excellent start to the story and I'm awaiting what else may happen with the story.

Thats quite the detailed origin. Even tying the comet to Anne and James meeting so you even have parts of Kim's origin there. Cool way to tie Kim and Shego. So you have the twins not being twins perse. The creatures made two versions or something along those lines.So it was basically one person split to two. That should prove interesting fodder for later.

And to Anne and Shannon interaction. Very sweet.

Read you later!

In-F*cking-credible!

Is my mind playing tricks on me or is this a revision of an older story you've written of the same name?

Either way, this is really, REALLY good! I'm at a loss -Where should I begin?

Anne's nurturing tenderness, "Shego's" youth, innocence and misfortune; you portrayed both deftly with great skill. I was really moved, such that I'm having trouble describing myself.

I was also quite impressed with the originality of Shego's green alien symbiote. I can wait to see how that element will pan out.

In the end, I had the strange sensation that Anne was going to adopt Shego, though I can't explain why? Those two just seemed to fit well together, I felt.

I'm most excited for what's next! Most Satisfactory!

AW! Poor Shannon!

Interesting take, though...a symbiote of sorts. I wonder how she's going to continue taking the added presence in her head...