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| Yoroichi.Is.Sailor.L 2008-10-06 ch 48,  | abuseAmazing... Simply... Yeah. Well, you said you didn't know what would happen after you write the next part of their road trip so... I was thinking, what about Soichiro calling Light-Kun after he figures out Light-Kun is gone? Because Light-Kun has his cell phone on him, right? And after that, maybe Light-Kun could have his first look at Whammy's... And get a faceful of soccerball from Mello, since that was how Mello was first introduced in the manga, kicking a ball into someone's face and then laughing. Just a thought... I hope you take my ideas into consideration... - Yoroichi.Is.Sailor.L |
| mattneedschocolate 2008-10-05 ch 48, | abuseLMAO!XD Plz Update Soonz!CX |
| Prince Raiden Ruler of thun... 2008-10-05 ch 48, | abusecry cry pandabear ill save you !! ^.^ ^-^ please update ^^ |
| Shinigami_Lawliet 2008-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseMatt and Mello need to have a fight! i just want Mello to cry for some reason =D I love this fanfic, especially the Kareoke part |
| LsgirlDeathNote 2008-10-04 ch 48, | abuselol! I love your fanfic ^^ they should stop off at a service station ;)lol |
| Jordan's Gal 2008-10-04 ch 48, | abuseL you fruit! |
| rylie 2008-10-04 ch 48, anon. | abuseOMG i love this fanfiction ^^ dunt end it or else! |
| Chibi Tsuki Hikari 2008-10-04 ch 19, | abusexD omg this is my favorite chapter by far! *laughing* I loved the last comment by L “Light-chan, I do not believe we purchased any waffles.” xD ty so much ur such an awesome writer |
| XFamousXLastXWordsX 2008-10-03 ch 48, | abusethen why don't you write some lemon? it would be great! update soon please! |
| XxXDeathIncarnatedXxX 2008-10-03 ch 48, | abuseMiSaMiSa - its was so cute! >:3 Lee- i lyk chocolate :D (and mello covered in it ;D ) |
| crimsoneyes44 2008-10-03 ch 48, | abusea minor error: "getting to old"- it should be TOO. But aside from that, wonderful job. I love basically all of your stories. |
| H-MMC 2008-10-03 ch 48, | abuseMan I want to see this list. Did you actually make one? It would be soso funny if you did. You could put like the most random places on there. Like the bathroom of a pet shop in Paris. DUDE! THEY SHOULD GO TO PARIS! |
| Kit-Pocket 2008-10-03 ch 48, | abuseYou are such a pervert, L... I love it so. XD “Does Light-chan always object initially because he thinks the unwilling-uke act arouses me?” L murmured, voice husky. He paused slightly before admitting, “Because it does.” That line was perfect! I never really thought of the protesting that way before. Light probably would do it on purpose... Great job! ^^ |
| saku-enjie 2008-10-03 ch 48, | abuseASDFASDF you're so EVIL >w< always tempt us with a lemon... T~T |
| Kunoichi21 2008-10-03 ch 48, | abuse...Are you even AWARE of how kinky that was? Seriously. I'm practically drooling because of that...I'm going to straight up tell you: that turned me on. This story frequently does that to me. |