I never thought of having these two characters interact but I like that you did. It has a very somber tone to it. Made me feel for Sakura and the emotions the war is causing. Nice side of Temari as well. Keep up the great writing!

I always liked Tenten. I guess you can say she is my favorite character. So this chapter made me feel kind of sad but you wrote it all to sound so convincing. I think you did a great job at capturing Tenten as a killer. Good Job!

I read all the chapters and opted back to the first one. I think this is my favorite one. I was definitely pleased by the end. A lot of writers pin Ino as a seductress and I like how you portrayed her as disliking the deed but wanting to save other kunoichi from having to endure such a task. More so that she managed to succeed each mission and remain a virgin. ) Very hopeful (especially since the ones to follow were a little saddening) GREAT JOB!

Nononono! Don't scrap it! I don't think it sucks!

...Btw, who's the lucky guy?

Ps. It's Passivesky for LJ come to sneak a look at your fic.

Oh, and I'm so glad I did. I wish I could be much more lengthy right now, but I've really got nothing much to say other than, 'Your writing is absolutely beautiful'. Which it is. And I adore you right now. Where have been hiding that talent, Red?

Fantastic writing. Love the take you had with Karin, mainly because she's "mah fave."

Please continue writing.

Tenten has always struck me as the most serious and well adjusted kunoichi. Of course, that could be because she is my favorite. ;)

That said, I do think she would have had a difficult time with her first kill, simply because she seems to value life quite a bit. I'm a little bit confused though: was it all in her head, or a bad dream brought on by her first murder?

Good job, although I'm not sure I liked this one as much as the first.

Say what you like about wanting to scrap this, but I really liked it. The premise has been done before, of course, but your take was still good. Excellent vocabulary, wonderful story telling, and you didn't drag it out. Good job!

It's safe to say I'm in love with your writing style. I love how in character everyone is so far. Chapter 3 was great. Loved the interaction. I hope you keep writing these are truly wonderful.

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Ooh, the last line was marvelous!

Oh wow, that wasn't what I expected. I actually didn't know what to xpect but I must say that that wasn't it. I liked it - very much, so much so that I wonder why I never thought of it myself (which, as self-centred as it sounds, isn't). It's very believable and I think you did a brilliant job - you portrayed both of them perfectly. Good job! Keep it up! Happy fourth!

I feel sorry for her.

I'm wondering who is to come next. Although not many people use them, I think that Anko and Konan would be good in this collection.

That's wonderful.

I usually hate it when people use Ino to be 'that' kind of kunoichi, but you did it spectacularly and non-whorish.

I like it alot.

...I guess that's the hard part of being a ninja, huh? You really did a good job of portraying her emotions. It was good. :)

I never really thought about Ino killing before. This is an awesome rendition. (is that the right word...?)