This was breathtaking. You have perfected the art of emotion; heart wrenching pain, such as this. You kept Shinobu in amazing character and your imagery allowed me to practically read this as an episode, watching each image pass before my eyes. The poetry inserted gave it beauty, while your style gave it class. This has to be the best fanfic for 'Here is Greenwood' that I have ever read. Bravo. Beautiful.

I *loved* this story. It was just-- well, something startlingly close to perfect. The only other thing I might desire out of it is a continuation. (I know, I know, the ending is revealed, but I want to *read* it!) (the most adorble Chibi-Mitsuru-like face she can muster)

Onegaaaaaai? ^_~
~Rena-chan

You use a very beautiful style of writing. It goes well with the internal monologue. It's very sad--but nicely written. ^^