That is so sweet and so very, very sad. Very well done from the perspective of a 5-year old. Great job!

You got the 5-year-old thing down very well! It's... creepy this story. Well, only because you can feel the forboding throughout it. And you did Yuiren's voice so well. So, well, bascially what I'm trying to say in too many words is, good job.

...(sniffs)...why must she die?..She's so cute.(starts crying while remembering the anime)It's well written through her perspective, very childish thinking.

*sniffs* imooto-chan...*cries* YUIREN!

I love this fanfic...At least someone is thinking about Yuiren! *cries even more*

Omigod that's before Yurien died. *sniff* She was so young! why'd she die!