Noes! He got saved in the end T-T Great fic! I really was hoping he'd stay there though, and go... grey, if not dark.

well this was certainly different.

woow!! i loved this.
please write another fic like this ^^

wow that was intense, I really liked it though, and I must say that when ron saved him, I was waiting for something to happen where it hadn't really happened. anywho, I loved it!!

I liked it. Although it was a bit rough, but the piece is after all NC-17. I noticed you had repeat some lines in the middle of the story though:, but I can't find it now! *smacks forehead* Also, this looks a bit weird:

'“No, ** iyou/i, boy!”'

Not only PWP, eh?

Very good.