you're really good at writing, this was so funny i ran out of breath when i finished reading! the way tenten said it with a crayon idea was so original.

ah! so awesome!! your analogy of Tenten's problem with the crayons is genius and creative! I love your writing!

LOL! This is a very odd fiction but I like it! X3

Crayons... lol.

Panda-chan

that was really good!! how about a proluge and another chapter for when she tells him she is pregnant

so funny.. *laughs head off*

Do ninjas really go that far to tell anybody anything? Or is Tenten just really that special?

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Haha! I had fun.

And suddenly it all makes sense. xD This was fun to read. I never thought to describe such things with crayons as the medium.

Tenten boring Sasuke with her technicalities was absolute win. And I love the open-ended ending. Gives room for more . . ?

fatal_red // xxfatal

Yeah, this was good. I imagined everything under the sun was going on from her confessing her love to being pregnant. The crayon comparision was hilarious.

omg, at first i thought she WAS pregnant, but then you went on about how they couldn't have sex and stuff, and then i was like oh...and then at the END, LOL!

and red crayon equals period, LOL!

and your blood red trilogy...ur obsessed with periods aren't you? lol.

well, update soon!

ahh... It's been ages since I've signed into this.
Anyhow, part three of the blood red...series was, as per usual, more than a little giggleworthy at times. Tenten explaining the science of her menstrual cycle to Sasuke for instance, or "He was right; they were not sexually-deprived animals, even if they sometimes do act like ones."
Splendid work... oh. In Shikamaru's section, you refer to Tenten as Temari.
"This was supposed to be his day-off, his quiet time; it was all he had until Temari arrives late in the afternoon."
Or was it intentional? Either way, I found it a bit ambiguous... -frowns and dies-
Hey! I think I could pick out your writing style from reading (just so you know...). It's quite distinctive. ^^

*Kat

And I thought something really big happened... I still can't figure out something... Why use crayons as an example? I am puzzled... Ah well, must have been a relief for tenten when Neji didn't overeact or something... hehehe...

Good job on the chappie! I loved it!!

lol... omg, that was awesome... i loved this chapter... shikamaru... so prefect... and sasuke... hahaha...

but I just got to say, I loved Neji's last line and then the last line in the story... "that too"... so funny... prefect. Because (as I'm sure you intended), that was what I was thinking from the beginning... did not see that one coming... gives Shikamaru's “No guy in his right mind would want to hear something that troublesome!” line a new meaning... lol... awesome job!

hey Cassandra, it's been a while (or maybe I've just been completely out of it... that might be it XP)...

cute story... I haven't really been reading anything lately, but I saw your username and figured I'd read this one since I already know I like your style.

anyway... love that line: "The beginning would be nice." lol... especially coming from Lee... anyone else it'd be sarcasm... but Lee, total sincerity. XP It reminds me of a line in Alice in wonderland; err, rather THROUGH THE LOOKING GLASS... i think it was king who said "Begin at the beginning and go on until you come to the end, then stop." ... lol...

and the line about of Tenten doing somersaults and singing the alphabet backwards, while Lee just stands still, but he'd look stupid... awesome... XD

I tend to play Lee as more of an emotional goofball, with the occasional moments of seriousness and intelligence ... so it was a little strange for me to see him so... insightful, and deep... not to mention calm... but... I liked it... Lee is so the perfect brother figure... and hahaha... i LOVED that she thought of Shikamaru... lol...

good job on this chapter! As always, very well written. XD

That is wonderful! Sweet! Funny! I love it! Will there be a third chapter? How Tenten breaks the news to Neji that she is pregnant must be hilarious!

Cute! Awesome job!! XP