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| lamexicana 2008-07-15 ch 8, | abuseOhh c´mmon... it can´t be over... You did an amazing job. I could felt every feeling you described... I am very glad some one puit every atention on Booker heart.. finally, I like to thing that Booker is not just "te bad one", he has a story behind and Jody says something in one episode, when Hanson things she was with him, that "he was a good man" or something like that... Well... thank you very much, sorry because it is over, but i am going to follow your fics... |
| Ghostwriter 2008-07-15 ch 8, | abuseAwesome job. Loved the story. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| tewksgirl 2008-07-15 ch 8, | abuseWhen I read the first chapter, I thought you had killed off Hanson! Boy, was I relieved as I read on! LOL I was expecting a few more chapters about Tom's time in the hospital, but as I read on, I think that you did an excellent job of finishing the story. I really enjoyed this one. |
| ellennar 2008-07-13 ch 7, | abuseevil cliffy, don't leave us there for long and update soon! |
| firebunee 2008-07-08 ch 7, | abuseEkk Please hurry, you can only go without O2 for so long and then then you die... We must save Hanson! Thanks for this story! It is so well writen... Great Job! |
| tewksgirl 2008-07-08 ch 7, | abuseNononononononononono! is right...you can't leave it there! Poor Tommy, he is going to make it, isn't he? Wow, this chapter was beautifully written...I love the way that you describe everything. The wording that you chose made it absolutely perfect. I could actually picture everything in my mind, as if it were playing on the tv set. Oh, and the angst...I bow to your superiorness (if that's even a word) at the Tommy angst! Wonderful job... hope to see chapter 8 really soon (hint hint) |
| Hanson's Angel 2008-07-08 ch 7, | abuseHoly sh**. (sorry for the language but, Jesus). Superb. The best. That is all. |
| dumbblonde76 2008-06-15 ch 6, | abuseAH! i hope you update soon! :) |
| firebunee 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseOh Lord... please don't keep us in suspense for ever! That was awsome! When you are feeling better, I will be excited to see chapter 7 posted:-) Great Job! |
| tewksgirl 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseGlad you are feeling better, but a cliffy? SO not fair! Wonderful chapter...I loved the action in this one, especially how you portrayed Tom fighting for his life. The reunion was great, and then you had to throw us a curveball with Tom getting shot! Please, please, please update soon! |
| Procrastinatebyreading 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseso i will confess...i shouted out "NO!!" along with penhall at the end of this chapter. I was actually nervous while reading this as hanson was running through the woods ( I know, i was way too into it...or maybe you are just that amazing of a writer that you just draw people in so easily with your words...yes!!) Thank you so much for updating. I am sorry to hear that you were a little under the weather. Of course, you come first. Whenever you get around to updating is fine by me...I am just happier when it is sooner rather than later!! Another amazing chapter from my favorite jump street story. Your characterization is spot on as always...and you actually make me like Booker..didnt think that was possible...i would love if you would write another one with booker in it because you do him so well. so once again...thank you, thank you, thank you!! |
| procol harum 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseSorry to hear that, hope you feel better :D And great chapter, I loved you switched from person to person, made it more suspenseful(especially with having 3 heading to the cottage). But cliffhanger... I hope Tom doesn't died, he tried so hard not to. |
| Ghostwriter 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseWow. Great job. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Hanson's Angel 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseI'm so jealous of your writing. There. I said it : ) Very amazing. "On the edge of my seat" amazing. You have a gift and I thank you for writing such a great fic with it. Love every delicious minute of Hanson in this. Wow. (And sorry you haven't been well. . .but the wait for this chapter was well worth the time it took you to post it)... |
| debbiets 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseI'm sorry to hear you've been ill, I hope you are well on the road to recovery. Now to the story. That was a fantastic chapter, so exciting. You're very good at writing tense, action scenes, and what a shock at the end, I wasn't expecting that at all even though I had remembered Simon was still out there. This is a great story, and you're an excellent writer. I'm pleased to hear it's not on pause and I can't wait for the next chapter. (whenever you feel up to it, of course) |