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| elmolover123 2008-07-01 ch 4,  | abusekinda short relly good update soon |
| Nara Vine 2008-05-25 ch 4, | abuseLove it! I can imagine that... I look forward to seeing where this goes. |
| calamityxcooper 2008-05-19 ch 4, | abusethat was a funny chapter :) good work, i ike the two updates at once action that going on! |
| the epitome of randomness 2008-05-19 ch 4, | abuseWe're still waiting for iPhones in Australia :( I really loved this chapter, the new songs were so funny! |
| Faith E. Cassidine 2008-05-19 ch 2, | abuseokay, why are people saying Cokie can't be nice while u have Grace, and i'm being trashed for my ideas! sorry don't mean to complain, i like u're story but i want to see if u can fit dawn in the storyline. |
| Scorpiana Silvester 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseVery well written!! Update soon? |
| Hysteria and Chaos 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abuseCool story, I'm interested to see where you're going to go with this. Update soon. |
| Drucilla Black 2008-04-19 ch 2, | abuseYay for the new chapter...I've definitely gotten right into this story. Please update again soon! |
| blackflame28 2008-04-18 ch 2, | abuseThis story definitely has promise. I love reading fanfics about the BSC in high school, however, your chapters are a bit short. I am having trouble really falling into the story. I am also having a hard time with the second chapter. Kristy is totally different, with little explaination as to way. She seems totally OOC. I understand people change... but why? And what is with use of the full names? Kristen and Anastasia? *shrugs* i'll keep my eyes open for more. |
| the epitome of randomness 2008-04-18 ch 2, | abuseThis sounds weird, but Kristy reminds me of Gollum...yeah, I am weird, what gave you a clue? But I liked this chapter a lot, I love how Kristy is a stuck up *, and how Mal is popular too. |
| Minn 2008-04-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseI liked the first chapter, but the second isn't as good. It's too short and also repetitive. I find it hard to believe that Kristy would change into such an airhead as well. As she is, she's not very likable, so you'll have to put in some work to make it believable. One last thing: how can Kristy be "pretty broke" but then be able to buy real diamond earrings? I do think you did an excellent job with Claudia's chapter though, so keep writing and I look forward to the next chapter! |
| RyanStiles4Me 2008-04-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseI liked the first chapter, but this chapter was too short and basically just a repeat of chapter 1 - same dialogue and situation. I would've liked something a little more about Kristy's own inner thoughts like we did with Claud. |
| Ginnyloveslife 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseCan you say 'drastic' change. Wow. awesome. DEFINITELY make it a chapter fic. *nods* So, I will be waiting, I guess... Please listen to me. |
| calamityxcooper 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseYou should write a series of these that show each characters perspective of the breakup of friendship and how they reacted whose faul ect. that would be good. Good story |
| JazzyUK 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Please continue...there's nothing worse than reading a promising new chapter with no furtherance! Keep it up! |