Brilliant! I liked the ending a lot, didn't expect it. although, it was more short and nondescriptive than I would have liked.

Keep going please or is that it?

pfft! you had me going. : )

I love it, the end is so fun! "Shinobu, what are you reading?" It's so funny! Great job.

WOW That was wonderful.. and i love how it was Shin-kun reading it! HEHE but in my opnion that was wonderful!

Ugh, now i'm laughing /and/ crying. D@mn this isn't fair. haha, Shinobu's a yaoi fan, (Or just likes a good romance,) I just can't get over that. *rubs hands together and mumbles* 'All the more perfect for us yaoi fans. . ' X) And I just hate when that happens, school and my family always get in the way of my yaoi fandom with that constant "what are you reading?" From annoying little sisters and the having to leave early and stay up for school, not to mention my friends asking what I'm writing at lunch. lol. The perfect cure from the angst of yours I just read. Awesome job. _

Excellent

*smirk* That's funny. Don't you just love Shinobu?

Lol! Oh, poor Shinobu, people always do that to me when I'm reading naughty yaoi hentai too XD They're evil, I swear. I like this fic... but i want to read the rest of whatever he was reading _

*mad giggling* Sounds like me when I'm trying to read "fics" at school. xD! Yes, that's right. _

LOL! That was great! Bad, shinobu, bad.

:::giggles once again::: Hmm... Shinobu, don't get caught! He reminds me of me... :::laughs insanely and runs off, skipping happily. What an odd girl.:::