This is a very enjoyable fic to read, and just the right length too. I liked that both characters fully understood each other and the parts each played in the other's life. Many authors just have Dilandau trying to take advantage of Celena's innocence, so this was a nice change since IMO Celena at least partly helped to create Dilandau.

I'll be honest, though, and say that I skipped the lyrics and just focused on the text. I read them afterwards, and thought that their romantic tone didn't _quite_ fit in with the companionship expressed in the story.

In any case, good job! Thank you!