this is interesting.

but maybe apart from the jacob's POV and the Italy people ( you know who i mean), maybe you could do phil's POV. ( as in he might come to forks to support renee) or you can do the denali clan's POV. because that SHOULD be interesting !

about the fact that tanya used to like edward (i or she still does) and yea.

remember, these are just suggestions :)

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damn.

imagine that this really did happen to lauren

then id actually feel sorry for her.

she seemed so mean.

but i dont know.

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i like the renee.

we odnt really hear of her in the story and i was happy to read a well made fanficiton with renee

great work!

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such a cute story!

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Great, I really liked it! I had an idea of how to do SOMEone from Italy, but it might be hard to do all three. Maybe Jane and a couple other members. Let's say Alice sent a wedding invitation to Italy, or the guard found out, or it was just a random check-up. The Italians would go to see just how things are going, but not get close enough to Edward's hearing range and be indesicive enough for Alice not to see. Or better yet. Say Aro sent a human to pay another human to watch and observe from far enough away. Then you could tell the story from Aro's POV. I'm sorry, really tired right now but if you're interested inmore, send a PM or reply. Update soon!

All of these chapters are very interesting. The Lauren one was very...unexpected, but still good. Love how the last sentence is the same for each chapter.

Hey, i read your note and you could do with when Edward, Bella and Alice are escorted to the three brothers. Aro's could be of him having a flashback to the time when Edward came and he had to share his memories of his time and Bella. How he felt protective of her, and all the specail moments. Then it could go back to the present were he sees how Edward protects Bella from Jane and never lets her go. With Marcus you could do, since he feels the relationship, how he sees them towards each other, how she loves him and he towards her. The same with Caius, how Aro told him of it when Edward come to ask for his death, ect. The interpretuation of them now (Bella and Edward) when they go to meet the three brothers again.

I loved these! They were so cute and I feel that you really were in the character's head and each of them have there own voice! Great Job! I just wish there was more!

Hi again!

I finally managed to make an account, so I could try to write too!

As your fics were the first ones I have ever read, I would LOVE if wou could read and comment on mine too. Give me some tips!

I look forward to read some new stuff from you!

Kisses from Brazil!

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PS: Maybe you could do the Aro's POV of Edward's "visit" to Italy, in the New Moon.

it's a good chapter, but i do think the other ones are better. are you writing more chapters? i really like them.

Great POVs! I love how Esme's epiphany with the petals intertwine with Edward's delicacy toward Bella. Very, VERY characteristic actions and words of Bella and Edward. You did wonderfully.

hehehe hes just like jacob ru done with the story? its really good especially laurens good job

really good chapter, i think you've got Billy's charecter spot on.

dobby

i love all these chaps:)

maybe for the volturi u could have jane come back and tell aro or sum1 about the whole situation with the newborn vampires and they see how they act and hat or like 1 of there memories or i think they get invited to the wedding cuz in the 4th book bella has that wedding gift from aro..

idk just sum ideas:)

renee's chapter.. o my god... This is so touching !