Nice story but check your spelling, please. It's painful to read because there are so many obvious spelling errors.

Awwwwww how sweat i never expected Shikamaru to be an overprotective father

Daichi is so cheeky. kinda like naruto when younger.

I never liked Sasuke.

Uh- cliffys would end at the person after you is- but nvm,

Oh gosh... 30 loooooooooooooooooooooong minutes... that is

Cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyybaby LoL! Cool for a first word.!

Gaara turning paler than he already is? AWETHOME!

AWAII YOU STUPID GIRL YOU'RE DISTRACTING ME FROM MY HOMEWORK. LoL JK I'm in the process on it I love your stories!

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I hope for a long-lasting relationship with Kanky-san! *bows and gives a bouquet of flowers*

Awhh! That is something I'd like to see happen in Naruto! :)

Hilurious! Love the Kanky part LOLOLOL

Awesome story dude!If u had ended it with the twins marriage it wud hav been better!

OH EM GGE! This story is great! *kneeling ang bowing* IDOL! wow! as in wow! Let me tell you two things, because of this story, 1. I'm more in-love and infatuated with ShikaTema; and 2. All the hate I have for Sasuke increased (Stupid wannabe) *no offense to Sasuke admirers*

Anyways, thank you for this fine piece of work. I will be forever a fan. Thank you and I hope there will be more Shikatema stories to come (just one thing though, I really hate to read an uncompleted fanfiction so that may be a reason why I take too long in submitting a review - *gomen*)