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Lillith-hime's Immortal Realm 1/1/10 . chapter 4
This story makes me want to read more and more! It's rather scary though... I don't really like scary stories! They're scary! (No really!)

RimaxKawaii

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Aya Miyamoto
Lillith-hime's Immortal Realm 1/1/10 . chapter 3
Like the other two times, your stories are great!

I notice my reviews getting shorter and shorter...

RimaxKawaii

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Aya Miyamoto
Lillith-hime's Immortal Realm 1/1/10 . chapter 2
Oh, that's kind of a cliff hanger, but I like cliff hangers, especially when there is already another chapter after it already updated!

RimaxKawaii

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Aya Miyamoto
Lillith-hime's Immortal Realm 1/1/10 . chapter 1
That was good! But then, there's the dialogue which is kind of hard to follow. Other than that, that was very good!

RimaxKawaii

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Aya Miyamoto
ChristinaAngel 10/2/08 . chapter 9
Good chapter! Sakura drunk was really funny and the ending was really creepy. Was it Sasuke who burnt her and punched her in the gut who was it the creepy guy with the gun? Thanks for updating!
ChristinaAngel 8/11/08 . chapter 8
Good chapter, I understand Sakura's breakdown now and Ino's surprise was so cool! There were a little more spelling and grammar mistakes than I would have liked and could have been fixed by proof-reading it really carefully, but I'm glad you updated!
ChristinaAngel 6/15/08 . chapter 7
What's up with Sakura? That was slightly weird. The dairy products thing was funny. Thanks for updating!
cassy123Ino 5/25/08 . chapter 6
nice chapter! sai and ino are so cute together! the positions help alot. um for a song i like "bring me to life" or "my immortal" both by evanessance. "heaven" by dj sammy is good.
cassy123Ino 5/25/08 . chapter 5
naruto is crazy, but in a good way , sai is just mean, sakura amd sasuke are so cute! im glad hinata and temari r okay and i love last christmas.! exellent chapter!
cassy123Ino 5/25/08 . chapter 4
o.o OH MY GOSH i cant belive that happened to poor Ino! and are Hinata and Temari alive? dont kill them off plz... curse sai haha its his fault. great chapter im completly hooked now!
cassy123Ino 5/25/08 . chapter 3
oh my gosh! why is Ino acting like that? and i would like to know the positions for the band! great chapter!
cassy123Ino 5/25/08 . chapter 2
oh i loved chapter two and i never wana wake up! haha i didnt get the part where neji said back to you ambie. 2 questions. 1 who is ambie? you? 2 was that part like a news report or something? and the lessons to hinata were funny
cassy123Ino 5/25/08 . chapter 1
very cool first chapter and i thought the "friend" was going to be naruto! ahaha the only part i didnt like was how the words were jumbled up.
cassy 5/25/08 . chapter 1
very cool first chapter and i thought the "friend" was going to be naruto! ahaha the only part i didnt like was how the words were jumbled up.
ChristinaAngel 5/22/08 . chapter 6
Sai and Ino got together! So cute. For a song you can do 'Misery Business' by Paramore or Comatose by Skillet! Also Sakura's daydream was really funny!
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