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Reviews for: Bitter
BlushingEmerald
2009-09-29 . chapter 1
I know this is a one-shot, but it's so hilariously dark and... just fascinating. I love it. So much is crammed into so few words. It really makes me wish for more.
Lotiolentus
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
I absolutely adore your writing. I don't know how many times I keep re-reading your stories. Please do not give up. You just CAN'T!
Hanna
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
ROFLMAO! That Sirius Black...

I loved the descriptive language in this. Very vivid. It sounds like the challenge was really silly, but you did a great job turning it into a not silly story.
cecelle
2008-04-09 . chapter 1
This was excellent. Evocative and atmospheric. Dark and strangely hopeful at the same time.
elethian
2008-04-07 . chapter 1
The cake fic to end all cake fics, indeed! Galleon a bean -- cocoa beans then? (At least, this had better be a chocolate cake. I'm going to be disappointed with my image of Severus licking the ladle if not.)
Alex the Anachronistic
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
That was good. It was a bit confusing at some parts, but it was AU so I kinda expected that.
zule bean
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
Wonderful! I have to agree...I would love to see this fleshed out into a longer ficlet.
unlikely2
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
Actually, I find that last line quite hopeful in a 'wonders will never cease' kind of way. ~ craves cake ~

Well told.
wynnleaf
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
I enjoy your style of writing and your take on Snape. This one was particularly original. Brandy and very bitter chocolate? Wow, amazing. And I suppose a potent remedy against dark magic. I like the way you weave the unusual revelations of the cake into this story.
Murgy31
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
That was great!
Emu
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
Superb. Utterly superb. My hat is tipped to you. *I don't normally wear a hat, but I find that this occasion calls for one ^_~* I know you've decalred this as one shot but I would adore reading more of this. I'm frettfully curious as to the evenets leading up to this piece as well as those subsequent. In any event, fantastic job!
whitehound
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
Chocolate cake, I take it. This is a really interesting and original piece of work.
ReeseLouise
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
Well, that was... really something else. I liked it, but boy, it was weird. Hogwarts destroyed... :(
WytchOfTheValley
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
This didn't just suck the happiness out of me, I think it sucked out my soul!

This was totally not what I expected, but Snape baking a cake is anything but expected, so I guess I got what was coming to me. LOL

Very well done. I liked how the dialog is so sparse so it's impossible to tell what anyone is thinking except Snape.
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