| Reviews for chasing pavement |
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floating on clouds above 5/20/13 . chapter 1Love this! :) |
vivi-g weasley 10/8/12 . chapter 1Absolutely loved this one. It's perfect. I just wish it was longeeer. You have a way to make feelings stirr deep inside with just a few words. I know this is all from a while back, but I just wanted to let you know that someone's still reading and thinking that some of these stories are pretty amazing :) |
Blue Aidelle 10/20/11 . chapter 1Rocking line! |
AdotD 10/11/09 . chapter 1Nice. |
The Disappeared 5/15/09 . chapter 1I liked it. It felt pretty real, with the weariness and all. Very nice - I love the title (and the corresponding song) too. Such a poetic feel. ANyways, great job! |
pockybandits89 5/4/09 . chapter 1now it's Sakura walking away |
TheSecretNotebook 3/14/09 . chapter 1is it bleeding love? well that was great, as expected. kinda heavy hearted |
the general girl 12/15/08 . chapter 1 I don't think I ever really told you how much I loved this thing in my last (long ago) review, so I logged out just for you. xD So, this is one of your many stories that I love love love love love to the nth degree. Sakura's feelings are just portrayed SO WELL, and it's just so easy to relate to even outside of these circumstances (love), and the language used is superb and just right to convey Sakura's being across. I seriously think this is the millionth time that I've reread this. Just...GREAT JOB AND THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. -the general. |
queenofbitches 11/21/08 . chapter 1This is beautiful. Gah, I know. That word again! I must have a very limited vocabulary. -grimaces- But still, it is. And every word rings true. And something about Sakura's thoughts make me want to choke and start crying. |
TigerLilyette 9/21/08 . chapter 1aww sik:) |
ALICEsque 5/22/08 . chapter 1Goodness, I spent forever looking for this. I swear I searched every type of ground /except/ pavement. All I could think of was "You cut me open." Reading it again was worth every effort made. Sasuke's confusion and then sudden understand at the end was worded amazingly. Thank you for writing this. ] |
shewhogoesblah 5/12/08 . chapter 1Haha! It's Bledding Love by Leona Lewis! :D |
Madame Band Geek 5/7/08 . chapter 1I was trying to read this yesterday but my internet wouldn't let me. BUT IT WAS SO WELL WORTH THE WAIT. Like oh my god. SERIOUSLY. I especially loved Sakura's brooding and her observation of the simple things about Sasuke- like the way he walks. (I do EXACTLY the same thing about my current crush, but you don't care about that, do you? Anyway...) My other favorite part? Her describing that it wasn't just infatuation- it had matured, deepened, mutated into an instant awareness. That part was frickin' amazing. Utterly fantastic. Completely wonderful. A job very well done. :D |
SunnyHinata 4/26/08 . chapter 1Was the song Bleeding Love? It sounds familiar... |
viviannnnn 4/11/08 . chapter 1and I keep bleeding. Leona Lewis- Bleeding Love. It's funny, cause I was just listening to that song when I was reading this and then boom! The line appeared. Amazing singer she is. Haha. Well, let's hope I'm right or else I'd be embarrassed talking about this singer and all. Beautifully written. |