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rghbw65
2009-10-27 . chapter 8
REVIEW SOONER!
TheBloodyLoveOfSakuraHaruno
2009-10-12 . chapter 8
Ah! I feel so bad! I haven't been reading any of my fanfics lately. For at least a godd two-three months now! And trhis is like one of my favorites. Mystery Girl:Karin...hey...is A karin??
x l a z y p s y c h o
2009-09-29 . chapter 8
Well, this is better than the old version, the one without Daitaro.♥

ShikaIno part. And from what I remember, ten ten's stepsister was kind in

what version:] If I may ask, what does BCBG mean?
KittyCatBabe
2009-09-24 . chapter 8
YAY! FINALLY! Me happy! Dramah, dramah, dramah. And a bit of fluff, of course. And...-TADA! InoShika! XDXDXD I'm delighted! Poor Saku...Or should I say, poor Sasuke-KUN. I like the concept of 2 parts, we all want more after a good story like this. And to all A's- you guys are hilarious! XD Really good chappie, almost worth all that waiting. Emphasis on almost, so keep it up! And give Tennie some more screen time...Kisses!
KYizumi
2009-09-16 . chapter 8
i love this story
keep up the amazing work :)
XxXMiss'TeaseXxX
2009-09-12 . chapter 8
I really love the way you wrote this story.The only two good stories that i ever read about sakura being one of the queen bee was yours and another, forgive me i can't remember the name.In one of the chapters someone flamed you and said something about a book- gossip girl perhaps or something like that?

Well anyway this story is refreshing since i'm geting tired of the stories where sakura is poor and an orphan and then she falls for the bad boy that is Sasuke and seeks his protection from his evil fangirls.This story is so going on my favorit list.Another thing did you arrange any kind of pictures to see the outfits they're wearing.I'm not really into fashion so and i don't really have the best of styles but if you leave me in a store alone for two hours, baby i'll rock!

i wonder who Ms./Mr A is.Update soon :)
XxSasukeSakuraxX
2009-09-12 . chapter 8
Was the girl Temari? (Shikamaru's arranged marriaged thingy?)
anyways lol i loved the chapter! and the pretty little liars seris is really awesome! i love flawless and unbelievble :p but yup please update lol x
XxSCENEandHEARDxX
2009-09-11 . chapter 8
Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Sakura does something amazing in return for Sasuke's trick!
SASUKEGURL
2009-09-11 . chapter 8
REAL CUTE!
Shubhs
2009-09-11 . chapter 8
LOVE the story!XP XD XD XD
SeaweedBrain'sWiseGirl
2009-09-10 . chapter 8
This was awesome.

Loved pool scene. And the ShikaIno scene was so adorable.

Hope you update soon. :*
Electrified
2009-09-10 . chapter 8
Aww. This ShikaIno was so cute. We need more of it in the world.

Is the Mystery-Troublesome-Girl Mini Ino? Back when they were kids?

This chapter was awesome! Update soon!
Sinful.Emerald
2009-09-10 . chapter 8
Mysterious girl is .. Temari? :o
Awesome chapter once again.
and sasuke's revenge/staging thing was very very cool and unique. I admit I wasn't expecting it to be staged either, I was just as shocked as Sak. Was totally expecting the whole 'sasuke-wasn't-thinking-and-couldn't-control-his-love/lust-for sakura'. But yeah, good stuff. And omg WOMG SHIKAINO! Muahahahaha yey!
chikako-chan ftw! ;)

-sinful
icinnamonx3@yahoo.com
2009-09-09 . chapter 8
cute! :) update soon!
x.BlackBloodBlossom
2009-09-09 . chapter 8
Meh, holy ** you updated!! Thank you so much. Who doesn't love a super long ** chapter. Eep. Wonderful scorage. I really just love the way this story is going, so much drama. It's so unique, i mean I've never actually read a story like yours before, and it's just truly inspiring and surprising and one of a kind...well that I know of. Props to you!

Okay first off, I love reviewing stories like this, I just want to make authors like you feel greatly appreciated and feel encouraged to update and stuff like that. So that's probably why I reveiw and a bunch more stuff like the fact that I LOVE this story(like I've previously stated above.)

Okay, this whole party was just so much drama and it's just so good to read, like I can't get enough of it. I just loved how this went. I mean I actually that that Yuina would at least heed the girls (Kunoichi clique)'s warning and dumped Sasuke, but no Sasuke just had to be his pretty boy self and play the innocent. Che, like that's possible with someone as much of a playboy like him That's just really disgusting how he plays all the fangirls like that. I mean I actually expected at least his previous exs to at least warn Yuina too, but I guess their pride and admiration for the Uchiha blocked them from that path and the fact that they are FANGIRLS.

I liked how much Sakura went through, and then having that little 'somewhat drinking' thing with Tenten just seemed to leave her in higher spirits I'm guessing that's due to the fact that she drank too much and all. But I just like how this is going, you show the perfect detail and include the character's feeling too. That's just truly wonderful.

I feel so bad for Hinata. I mean she still hasn't told her friends yet and eventually that's not going to turn in her favor...I think. 'What goes around, comes around' right? So when the other girls eventually find out with they forgive Hinata or believe that Hinata doesn't trust them enough? Just a simple action usually leaves a big action and decision. I just feel so bad for her, and then when her and Hanabi were in the ladies' room. Was just something so horrid. All Hinata's growing up with was the fact that her younger sister was better than her, Hanabi would achieve the place as head of the clan, she would get presents from her daddy who loves her more than her sister. It's so sad to know how Hinata got through all of this.
Ugh, and that eavesdropper? That's just going to lead to so many questions and thoughts of hallucination to Hinata and nobody can handle all that pressure and stress.
I'm really looking forward to how Hinata's roll and predicaments are going to be solved and helped in this story.

I feel so bad for Ino, learnign that your dad is cheating on your mom with some '**' perhaps? It's just so heartbreaking and then having to deal with the situation when your mother eventually finds out and it's just so much for her to handle. A divorce and/or fight is never easy.
I really like the fact that you included Shikamaru as someone who has experienced or is experiencing the same thing and can relate. That's just a really extra of a bonus I guess and some fluff. Love it! It was a cute scene after their talk and discussion, it showed a lot of things. Not everyone is who they pretend to be. I really hope they get together, they're such a cute couple.

That last scene with Neji cam cording Sakura and Sasuke in the swimming pool was just actually something I didn't expect. Usually I'm really good at just noticing and predicting stories and stuff but your story is just so unpredictable really. I actually thought that Sasuke was drunk, completely drunk and was actually going to do something drastic or something in that category.
i actually like the fact that you put Neji's say in the situation too. It just shows he's not an unemotional bastard like Sasuke and that he actually has feelings even though they may not be as pronounced.

Update soon!!
I just really admire all the characters too.

-x.BlackBloodBlossom
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