Oh god more please, I gotta know what happened to Sasha!

(Please ignore the name. While I AM a fan of your work, it's just a username I have. :P)

SO WHY HAS THIS STOPPED?
WHY?
I'm so curious about...about...About MANY many things!
Please don't let this die.
Please? :(

-'Razputin damnit, wake up or you're FIRED!'
-'WHAT?!'

LOL! XD Its like how he made the diagnosis that Raz was dead when he never responded to that the first time!

OMG totally loved it *thumbs up* gotta love how Sasha takes on that whole fatherly-protective role when no one's looking! :P

And btw, love the way you write your OCs - very believable ;)

omg i love it

*SQUEL* You updated! OMG I LOVE YOU! *tears of joy*

Ok so these were my exact reactions: I 'aw'ed at Raz snuggling against Sasha, I LOLed at Sasha waking up to think he was dead, I thought the whole maternal/friendship reaction of Raz was SO cute, I smiled at Raz's continuous optimism and him yelling at the sky, I LOLed for minutes on end when he fell on his face again and then I imagined this hero/dramatic music as he was getting up, all the while saying 'I'm never gonna give up!'

Awesome work as always! (I'd love to beta read your stuff but like I said, never written a fan fic in my life! :P)

Kay, now I'm gonna go read the other updates! Keep up the good work!

AH OH NO WHAT HAPPENED DON'T LEAVE ME IN SUCH SUSPENSE AH *faint*
Bwahaha. Loved Raz's little outburst. Twas quite amusing. ^^
Bluh. Update this soon please. ^^
~NN1

Omgz! =0

I lurve your story. A lot. A whole effing lot. It's seriously my favorite Psychonauts story! Now I'm off to read CD101 (I hope it's just as good! :)

What a way to keep a positive state of mind Raz old boy

D8 NOO!
XD YESS!
*Shrug*
Awesome chapter. Made my teeth chatter for some strange reason. o.O
Maybe I'm just cold. :D
I'm so glad you updated. I was going through Psychonaut-fanfiction-withdrawls. It's self-explanitory... (Self, hyphen, explanitory. TWO WORDS!)
It's 4am, and I have no clue what I'm saying, so don't pay any attention to me.
OH NOES! What has Raz gotten himself into this time? I guess we'll find out, right? RIGHT? Good.

Started to read this while I was waiting for you to update CH:101. I'm glad I read it though. So suspenseful. CURSE YOU AND YOUR SUSPENSEFULNESS!
Could anything ELSE go wrong here? Seriously, if you could, you would torture that kid, wouldn't you? XD
EVIL.
Anyway, I will be impatiently waiting for you to update, biting my fingernails and drumming my fingers on the desk. And eating chocolate. M, chocolate.
Great story so far! Keep up the good work!

ARGH I'M SO SORRY I have so much to catch up on in my reading on . XD
GAHH You write fight scenes better than me. XD Well, so far, anyways. I haven't gotten to the nitty gritty battles in MY fiction yet. But yeah, the details are excellent.
Captured?! AH WUT!?
Bluh! Guess I'll have to wait for an update ^^
~Nintendo-nut1

Yeah we can still be friends... (sigh) Guess I'l have to find some other awesome story writing, psychic and science loving gal living in Wisconsin to... uh... m... cake...
Yay! Raz got found by some people. I don't know who they were. Fans most likely. They track you down everywhere... But... uh... found none the less.
Hm... Ford hugging Raz... I think his child-molester instincts are kicking in again. Horrible old man.
I thoroughly enjoyed Raz finding out that he was presumed to be dead. A most enjoyable read at that particular point. And Raz's wonderful monologue... Why doesn't he have a moustache? That would be cool. Oh, yeah... The 'little kid' thing...
Altogether I liked the little reunion that you created in this chapter and it... uh... was very nice to read. Thank-you.

Mongoose

P.S.
Raz V.S. Vegeta. There's a fight I'd pay good money to see... Who'd win do you think?

P.P.S.
If a clown's pancreas is eaten by the rabid confetti-eating kids, wouldn't that make him diabetic now? Poor diabetic clown... No more cream pies and fairy floss for you.

AH NO GODDAMN THE EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!
...what am I saying, I use them all the freaking time. XD Keeps the readers coming back for more.
I'm telling you, man... I'm gonna die of dramatic irony syndrome. I'm going CRAZY over here! Get out of the there and tELL em, Raz ARGH!
Keep going, darn you!
~Nintendo-nut1

Praise to the all powerful Psycho, whose writing entertains and inspires all mortal men... and women. Gotta say that or I'll find myself on the feminists hit-list... Again...
I got a lot of fun out of this; the similar amount of enjoyment that say, a dog would get tearing a newly planted tree out of the ground and ripping it to shreads in a terrible, leafy massacre!
However, (Oh no. Not a 'however') while I was reading the lovely interaction between Alex and Sasha, concerning Sasha's rather blunt, half joking comments about Raz being dead... I... I guess I just couldn't see Sasha actually being so unemotional about this. I know he's a bit contained in his emotions and that but... I don't know... Didn't work for me all that well... Though, I thoroughly enjoyed you adding in Sasha's comment to Alex to "get off your ass and help". It's like he's trying to snap him out of his little guilt thing, and it echoed his line towards Raz from the game, so I was kind of squeeling and such. As is my way...
Also I noticed that 'Mr.Erikson' seemed a little unconcerned about the recently half-dead Raz when he dropped from the celing. Man, I'm really being critical today, aren't I? Just let me go get some happy pills. *gets happy pils* Okay? Okay. Good.
I absolutely loved when Raz mentions Sasha and Milla and then gets 'invited' to explain who they are and does so in a really excited paragraph. This really captured Raz's enthusiasm towards the Psychonauts and it was a real treat for me to read. Thanks. Thanks. Thanks.
Mongoose
P.S.
Ending explosion cliffhangeriness is the best. I really hope someone gets blown up. Maybe Raz... As long as the puppy is okay, I shall be happy.

AH You found me out... *put all those weapons you mentioned on the floor in front of her*
Oh, I'm sure you'll give us the answers at some point, there's no doubt in my mind.
One was already answered; the poison bit makes sense. Properly has similar components to the Dream Fluff if its to affect psychic powers... yeah.
Aw... I want a husky. XD But I have two dachsunds and a cat, so I'm good for now.
Keep it up!
~Nintendo-nut1