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| flamethrowerqueen 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abuse*crying freely* You succeeded perfectly with this one, Thyme. I felt the depths of his despair, I felt the anger, the anguish, the darkness of his soul...the Angel in Hell. *sniffs* It was truly beautiful. (By sheer coincidence, I ended up listening to "Chop Suey" by System of a Down while reading this, and it fit perfectly.) |
| antipodkayne 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautifuly written work. I liked that. |
| Orioncat 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWow...Dark. Yeah that would sum up Dracula pretty much. I think that it is so sad that he believed she would be in Hell, I mean because honestly you really don't know. The Bible says that a sin is a sin. To murder and to lie are both sins and they do not have levels of wrong, just like good deeds you know. I go to a Baptist church, but honestly I am of no demonation. I do not believe that God would send a person to hell for taking their own life. I believe that love for the Lord and acceptance of his son is required not good works or being perfect. I actually have had much experience with sucide either with friends or my own trys (many years ago). I think that is why this story puts on such a new level to me...it is like I don't believe she was in Hell and therefore he cursed the Lord and effectively himself for nothing. It is sad. I think that is why I like the story of Dracula so much. It makes you question theology, love, life, and sacrifice. You really capture these themes my friend. Thanks so much. |
| Nightcrawlerlover 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. Ever-hungering fires. That's very...beautiful! Keep up the awesome, lovely work! |