 D.J. Scales 9/28/08 . chapter 10Well the couples in this universe seem different but i'm okay with it. |
 D.J. Scales 9/11/08 . chapter 8So that explaines Haven brown in the Newlywed universe. Great job lassie. |
 Freebird87 9/10/08 . chapter 8Tori's changing her name to Haven? I wasn't expecting that. |
 D.J. Scales 8/23/08 . chapter 6why doesn't older Marty just tell Tori the truth. just like Melody McFly learned the truth about the time machine. |
 D.J. Scales 7/17/08 . chapter 5Nice to see Regina Unger and her kids in the Newlywed universe. |
 Freebird87 7/6/08 . chapter 5This is an awesome story. |
 Macri007 7/6/08 . chapter 5there is one one to keep her away from her father is to go back to the day her mom died prevent it from happning and have her mom have a retrain order and find a new life... |
 Phish Tacko 6/25/08 . chapter 4You're doin' good! |
 D.J. Scales 6/23/08 . chapter 3Well it looks like doc managed to finish his objective without causing a time paradox. |
 Macri007 6/23/08 . chapter 3Hi,
I am Justin and i love Back To The Future. But Doc he is so crazy about the Space Time Cuntinum. I understand he is scaerd somthing bad can happen. But still as good pepole we should help those who are in trouble. Doc and Marty's hart may be going out to her but still if it were Doc's parents too and if they were in trouble what is the right thing to do "Up here" Docshould know that. I was watching Home Make over last night and the story is really bad and really really sad. This woman lost her sister and also she had to take in her sister's kids. It all started the duather of the sister was in the car with her father the car rolled over a few times the father died. Then what happend was the mom found a boyfriend but he came in one day with Buther knives and threaten to kill the mom. Then he had a court order to stay way from them. She found a new Boyfriend he was a nice guy. Then one night the ex boyfriend came in the house 2 AM and shot the boy friend and the mom. They both died. So all i am Saying This story should do more then just being scaerd of one Time travel thing in his head (Docs) he should use the time Travel thing at times to help pepole. "That what make us heros
Justin |
 Phish Tacko 6/23/08 . chapter 3That poor girl... |
 Freebird87 6/23/08 . chapter 3Keep going. I like this story. |
 Freebird87 6/23/08 . chapter 2Marty Jr was drinking coffee at nine? What's happening with the new generation? |
 D.J. Scales 5/4/08 . chapter 2Here's a suggestion. Why doesn't Marty just get a licinse to adopt Victoria Haven for his older self? |
 Phish Tacko 5/4/08 . chapter 2I this chapter! |