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| needles 2008-07-06 ch 5,  | abuseThis is an awesome story. |
| Macri007 2008-07-06 ch 5, | abusethere is one one to keep her away from her father is to go back to the day her mom died prevent it from happning and have her mom have a retrain order and find a new life... |
| Phish Tacko 2008-06-25 ch 4, | abuseYou're doin' good! |
| D.J. Scales 2008-06-23 ch 3, | abuseWell it looks like doc managed to finish his objective without causing a time paradox. |
| Macri007 2008-06-23 ch 3, | abuseHi, I am Justin and i love Back To The Future. But Doc he is so crazy about the Space Time Cuntinum. I understand he is scaerd somthing bad can happen. But still as good pepole we should help those who are in trouble. Doc and Marty's hart may be going out to her but still if it were Doc's parents too and if they were in trouble what is the right thing to do "Up here" Docshould know that. I was watching Home Make over last night and the story is really bad and really really sad. This woman lost her sister and also she had to take in her sister's kids. It all started the duather of the sister was in the car with her father the car rolled over a few times the father died. Then what happend was the mom found a boyfriend but he came in one day with Buther knives and threaten to kill the mom. Then he had a court order to stay way from them. She found a new Boyfriend he was a nice guy. Then one night the ex boyfriend came in the house 2 AM and shot the boy friend and the mom. They both died. So all i am Saying This story should do more then just being scaerd of one Time travel thing in his head (Docs) he should use the time Travel thing at times to help pepole. "That what make us heros" Justin |
| Phish Tacko 2008-06-23 ch 3, | abuseThat poor girl... |
| needles 2008-06-23 ch 3, | abuseKeep going. I like this story. |
| needles 2008-06-23 ch 2, | abuseMarty Jr was drinking coffee at nine? What's happening with the new generation? |
| D.J. Scales 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abuseHere's a suggestion. Why doesn't Marty just get a licinse to adopt Victoria Haven for his older self? |
| Phish Tacko 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abuseI ♥ this chapter! |
| twisterblake 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abusehey great chapter update soon |
| D.J. Scales 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseNice intro so far. Um i don't want to sound rude but didn't Marty already travel to Teen Haven's time period in another of your time travel tales? |
| needles 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. |
| Phish Tacko 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseWOO! |