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| D.J. Scales 2008-08-26 ch 10,  | abuseNow I for one am interested in what you plan to do next. |
| D.J. Scales 2008-08-06 ch 9, | abuseCharlie Needles and his gang. Nice, anymore bullies i need to know about in this story? |
| Eternal Density 2008-07-31 ch 9, | abusethat last paragraph cracked me up. |
| Eternal Density 2008-07-30 ch 8, | abusegood to see a new chapter. rather interesting plot |
| EmmettMcFly55 2008-07-30 ch 8, | abuseGood chapter. I also can't wait to see them all go to 1987... maybe you can expand on that part a bit? Just suggesting. After all, it'll be quite hard for Seamus to get used to 1987, even if it is for such a short time. Or how about George and Lorraine coming past the Browns, and George is stunned to see somebody who looks so much like his grandpa, great-grandpa and great-granduncle... and Marty having to come up with a cover story for Seamus. Anyway, it's a good story. I hope you'll add a new chapter, soon. But you shouldn't do a rush job, though - so take your time for it. |
| D.J. Scales 2008-07-15 ch 7, | abuseNice job with this story. Hey when are the bullies going to appear. |
| needles 2008-07-14 ch 7, | abuseThis is a great story. I look forward to Seamus going into the future with them. |
| needles 2008-07-14 ch 6, | abuseI liked the origin of Emmett's name. |
| EmmettMcFly55 2008-07-13 ch 7, | abuseGood chapter, and posted within such a short time! I frowned a little upon the fact you have Verne already telling Marty about his love with Linda now, but I am sure it will turn out fine. Also, I noticed Anette mentioned the word 'awesome'. While I'm not American, and therefore don't really know when that word got introduced, I believe that I've read the locals frowning on that word as Marty used it in a period after 1905. I don't know if it's right or not, I just wanted to alert you on it. Anyway, it's a very good story! |
| EmmettMcFly55 2008-07-12 ch 6, | abuseEmmett Lloyd Brown, huh? I always assumed Doc used his full name in 1885, since if he used his real first name why shouldn't he use the middle name, but it's your story. Anyway, good chapter. I like the way you split the chapters into two parts - one for Verne and his friends, and one for Marty. It's a good story and I'd like to read more. |
| Eternal Density 2008-07-08 ch 5, | abusei haven't read any bttf fics for too long! (been busy with stargate fics) good to see you're still writing prolifically. this is a nice one so far. |
| Phish Tacko 2008-07-06 ch 5, | abuseWell done. |
| Phish Tacko 2008-06-11 ch 4, | abuseAre you sure they had abortions in 1905? |
| D.J. Scales 2008-06-11 ch 4, | abuseWell this is interesting. So since Tiff's pregnant and Charlie's out of town who's the lead bully one of Mark's ancestors or one of of Bart's kids? |
| D.J. Scales 2008-06-09 ch 3, | abuseAnd thus it begins. |