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| justifiedlover 2008-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseGood, but you could use a beta to put help with grammer and sentence structure in paragraph. Just a hint... |
| brankel1 2008-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove it.Hopefully youwill get Bran & Kel together.And Val can go back to Buffalo.I'm glad Dylan told Bren he loved her. |