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pennypigeon 3/6/11 . chapter 1
funny stuff!
beingzen 2/23/11 . chapter 1
this was totally crack! I loved it!
scared of darkness 2/14/11 . chapter 1
hilarious lol... totally what should have happened...
betwixtful 1/11/11 . chapter 1
I was in a bad mood, this mad me laugh. Im gonna go read more of your fics now.
AmmyChey3X 10/19/10 . chapter 1
Awesome FanFic!
With Sasuke's outfit in Shippuden, he's practically begging for the rabid-fangirls to rape him!
Crowfether 8/16/10 . chapter 1
LOL XP
MoshiMoshiQueen 4/8/10 . chapter 1
Love this!
fromallthehysteria 1/13/10 . chapter 1
Favourite parts.

Kabuto wouldn't know fashion if it hit him in the face with a kunai," Sasuke scoffed. "Neither would you, judging by your outfit. Orange, again."Hey Naruto, why not remove my seal?" put in Kyuubi."No," said Naruto without turning. Kyuubi shrugged. It was always worth a shot."Oh no," said Sasuke darkly. "Orochimaru replaced my entire wardrobe. This was just the only thing that wasn't see-through or skin tight.
Haha You're really good at parodies.
SkywardShadow 7/10/09 . chapter 1
...*bursts out laughing
Way to go. I busted multiple guts reading this. Absolutely hysterical, and..scarily plausible. XD
qwertyflirty 6/19/09 . chapter 1
The truth to Sasuke's wardrobe has been revealed. I love your crack. "Burn! BURN!
And Sasuke is the idiot, of course. So stupid that he can't pick up the clues. :P

Good job. This is the best explanation that I have read so far. :D

And you're the best Naruto crack-writer so far as well.)
fading ink 6/5/09 . chapter 1
God, this was hilarious! After reading The Boy in the Photograph, I'd have thought you would write something... I don't know, more serious? I was greatly surpised! You know, there aren't that many writers who can pull off humor/parody. but you executed those two genres perfectly! Favorite parts"Your 'revenge.' Which is now known as running off to live in a rabbit warren with an insanely long-tongued guy, and not do your shirt up anymore," he finished with a smirk. Sasuke glared."He says he accidentally spilt oil on them and then dropped a candle."That could happen," remarked Kyuubi, joining the conversation for the first time."He said he got caught up in it, which is why he was screaming 'Burn! Burn!' when I came in," Sasuke added."Oh no," said Sasuke darkly. "Orochimaru replaced my entire wardrobe. This was just the only thing that wasn't see-through or skin tight."Yeah, cause we spent the last three years talking," said Sasuke sarcastically. There was a pause, and then Kyuubi snorted at the sheer amount of innuendo."And both in one day. With Naruto, it's usually 'whine whine, give me more chakra so I can go and molest Sasuke."Embarrassed, dobe?" smirked Sasuke, preening.

Really, this was quite the amusing one-shot. You know, they didn't seem OOC at all I could actually see Kyuubi and Sasuke debating over who was hotter! And the last part made me crack up
Outside of Naruto's brain, in the wreckage of the Sound base that Sasuke had so inconsiderately totalled in a fit of teen rage just because he was woken up, despite it being the middle of the day, a day which I might add had lasted fifteen episodes, which is almost five months if you're watching weekly, Sakura was staring at Naruto and Sasuke, whose eyes were locked together.'I wonder what's going on in there,' she thought.

What can I say? This is one of the best humor/parody fics I've read and trust me, I've read quite a lot. Thanks for making this so entertaining it's just what I needed to relieve my post-exam stress.
k 5/28/09 . chapter 1
"Maybe," said Kyuubi, squinting at the Uchiha. "His hair doesn't stick up stupidly like was a silence.

There's something missing there, obviously. Could I trouble you for a reupload? I am enjoying your crack.
zero434 5/19/09 . chapter 1
lolz so funny
TekJounin 2/9/09 . chapter 1
"Kabuto knows cross-stitch," said Sasuke flatly.

I'll bet he does. Too funny.
Crudy 10/22/08 . chapter 1
Your version's funny.

Teen rage? Haha, like that description too!
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