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| SweetPinkDragon 2008-06-04 ch 19,  | abuseI'm now officially hooked on this story. Thanks for keeping me awake last night - it was worth it. =] I like your idea of a new species, and you certainly got the characters - well, in character. You're an amazing author! |
| CrypticCalico 2008-05-13 ch 8, | abuseRachel's a smart cookie, isn't she? Someone caught Jamie on film. Uh oh. I'm still wondering what happened to her! -C.C. :) |
| CrypticCalico 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abuseOh, the plot thickens. I can't wait to figure out what all this is about her mother... And there's a cliffie at the end! 8O -C.C :) |
| CrypticCalico 2008-05-13 ch 5, | abuseAw, she shouldn't feel so bad about his death :'( It wasn't her fault... But I hope she kills that Yeerk eventually. He deserves all he gets. -C.C. :) |
| CrypticCalico 2008-05-13 ch 4, | abuse8o --crickets chirp-- HE KILLED HER DAD?! HOW DARE HE! I hope Jamie gets revenge on him for that... *growl* -C.C. :) |
| CrypticCalico 2008-05-13 ch 3, | abuse*mumbling* Stupid Yeerk, thinks he's so much better then her... too overconfident for his own good... -C.C. :) |
| CrypticCalico 2008-05-13 ch 2, | abuseOh no! Hack is taken over! O.o What will she do?! -C.C. :) |
| CrypticCalico 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is really interesting! I especially like the last paragraph when you're describing the sensation of flying, and how it feels to her. -C.C. :) |
| xxtigergirlxx 2008-05-06 ch 16, | abuseUH! WOW! this is getting reaaly good! I applaud you on a job well done! :) This was a great chapter.the only thing that I have to point out is that Jamie wouldn't have been able to tell if she was speaking with her mom right? That could've just been the Yeerk... But anyways... good job! Update! xxtgxx |
| xxtigergirlxx 2008-05-02 ch 14, | abusewow... WOW! so that's were the title comes from huh? Very good as usual but one question: Why is Rachel so angry at Jamie? I didn't get why she was so agressive towards her in this chapter... oh well! Update! xxtgxx |
| xxtigergirlxx 2008-04-30 ch 13, | abuseah! excelent chapter as usual!! Thanks for the sppedy update! I really appreciate it... Update! xxtgxx |
| CrypticCalico 2008-04-15 ch 6, | abuseI have to admit, I haven't read any Animorphs stuff for ages. But this has me hooked! You give wonderful descriptions, and your plotline seems really interesting. I'll be waiting for your update! -C.C. :) |
| xxtigergirlxx 2008-04-08 ch 3, | abuse:O WOW!! that girl is fierce! lol. keep going! xxtgxx |
| Mrowrkat98 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThe little arrow things that you usually use for thought-speak don't work on fanfiction, so you'll have to use brackets or italics. It sounds exciting. I can't wait to read more. |