please say you've got a new chappie lined up for this one. 'cause this story rocks! and i really want to know what happens to these two.

and, by the way, 'this story will end happy' implies they find a way out of the deal...don't forget dean!


and the story doesn't, CAN'T end happy if you don't finish it! gr...


xD so yeah.

this is not a story you can just leave here! i mean, this is freakin' awesome! and with all of the cliffies and questions you've got lined up...seriously. this baby needs an update!


keep writing!

*is speechless for days...seriously*

WOW!! That was ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! The perfect mix of humor, angst, mystery, and brotherliness...just PERFECT!

I hope, hope, HOPE that real life allows you to finish this at some point -- and the selfish part of me hopes it's sooner than later!

This is so lovely. Sad and poignant and full of great emotional conflict and love. Any chance you'll continue the story? Really great job.
K

Oh my god, that was heart-wrenching and heart-breaking and .. well, every other word with 'heart' and a synonym for 'aching' in it. Absolutely fabulous, it made me want to hug the stuffing out of both of them. You've perfectly combined a bit of levity and fun with deep emotional turmoil. Very well done, I loved it,

Huggels, Tomorrows Dust

I'm rereading this and hoping you will update again SOON! PLEASE! It's such a good story and it needs its amazing ending that I know you have in store for it! Please write more soon!! We are all waiting and hoping...

This is such a good story. Please, please, please continue!

Oh my lord lol I can't even find words to tell you how much I absolutely LOVE this story. I read the entire thing this evening--I cried several times and I've probably never said "aww" more often in my life.

I really really hope that you plan on continuing. This story became a favorite half-way through the first chapter.

Amazing work and I can't wait for the next update :)

I sincerely hope you plan to continue this because it's beautiful and heartfelt and just breaks my heart. Gorgeously done!

I just spent the evening reading this story. I've been unable to put it down. It's fascinating and heart-wrenching. I love it - the characters are so rich.

love your work,really do. When I was there reading the story, it almost made me cry. God, I hope you write more because I can't wait for the next installment. And as I said before, I love your work.

Hey! I just wanted to write and say your story is AMAZING! You are doing an amazing job capturing the brother's bond. I like to wait to review and then review after it has been a while to cheer you up, from lack of current reviews and help motivate you to HURRY UP!..hehe.. Pretty please.

poke poke when are you going to update? I'm DYING here... what an amazing story! You really know how to make that raw emotion real. Please PLEASE write more soon.

I just read every single chapter and I am completely blown away by your talent. You have deftly woven comedy and such strong brotherly love into an interesting and believable plot. I am anxiously awaiting the next installment.

Hearbreakingly and beautifally written as always! Fantastic job! Had me in tears...more please :)