 lunarecplise3 2009-12-01 . chapter 10Ari's seven, nine and ten made me wanna cry but they were really good. Ari was always one of my favorite characters because he was so misunderstood and you wrote him awesomely :) |
 lunarecplise3 2009-12-01 . chapter 9aww that made me not hate Jeb anymore :) |
 6464MiniDiceofRandomness 2009-12-01 . chapter 11I was honestly starting to believe you were dead. You're writing a novel? When did this happen? I am so out of the loop...
Very creative. This must have been SO hard to write. We know nothing about Anne, so you had to make up everything yourself. For that miraculous feat, I applaud you. |
 BlueWingedKitty 2009-12-01 . chapter 11I almost forgot how GOOD this thing was! Most stories that begin with 'Ten Things' usually only have a sentence or two for each. This is like a story. Actually, it IS a story. Best of all, you actually make things fit. Anne's chapter totally fit her. No real shockers. There were surprises, but everything just...made sense. Like how she felt about the flock, wanting to be a good mother, wanting to teach...it just all WORKED.
Wish James Patterson could read this. |
 melissaeverlasting 2009-12-01 . chapter 11Amazing. You're currently 2 for 2 on great comeback chapters! :)
My favorite line was "She can't deal with all of the self hate. It has to go somewhere. And so she pushes it off onto the experiments, the only things that she can think of as below herself." That's a gorgeous sentence. The end also, truly powerful. Keep it up :)
--Melissa |
 GoonlaLagoon 2009-12-01 . chapter 11Sweet. I always think of her as 'bad' but i quite like th nicer side. Good work. |
 Adnama19 2009-11-30 . chapter 2I MUST read more Fang drabbles! These are amazing...very, VERY nice job. I realize this was a very early chapter, but do you somehow still have the drabbles so you can put them in a reply? :)
Adnama |
 eclipsed heart 2009-11-30 . chapter 11Wow. Anne had a heart. Almost impossible to believe, but you make it credible at least. (:
~eh~ |
 Rowena of Naxen 2009-11-09 . chapter 10I like this story a lot :D And if you still have them, can I see some of the other ones for Fang?
-rowena |
 edwardismyromeo 2009-09-28 . chapter 2good story! i like the whole idea a lot! but uhm fang doesnt hate red... infact he prob rlly rlly likes red, cause all of his "so called girlfriends" have been red-heads... so yah im pretty sure he doesnt hate red. |
 Computermind123 2009-07-27 . chapter 2Wow loved the story!
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 veryannoyed 2009-07-16 . chapter 10intresting |
 crazy person alert 2009-06-24 . chapter 8I'm crying. Not a lot, but my throat's tight and I just sobbed a bit. That was so . . . so . . . *sobs* sad. I litarally sobbed there. I was listening to the song "The Little Things YOu Give Away", by Linkin Park and the main refiran is "All you've ever wanted is someone to look up to you". I thinkl that may have been the icing on the cake of emotions being altered by awesome people. And I still have that feeling in my throat . . .
I feel so /pathetic/. But, writing always makes me sad. Especially amazing writing. I do love this. |
 crazy person alert 2009-06-24 . chapter 7I didn't know there was more Fang . . . Cans I sees it?
I love how this turned out . . . it's chilling, almost and I'm sure JP couldn't have done it better, then again, his editers are the only thing keeping him from writing /Sues/, for God's sake!
But, back to the complimenting you. You deserve it. =). Lovely fic, even if lovely is the wrong adjective. |
 The One Called Demetra 2009-04-24 . chapter 4The pedantic bastard here to mention something--Val was Martinez in three but she didn't meet Alberto till five. |