I like this story a lot :D And if you still have them, can I see some of the other ones for Fang?
-rowena

good story! i like the whole idea a lot! but uhm fang doesnt hate red... infact he prob rlly rlly likes red, cause all of his "so called girlfriends" have been red-heads... so yah im pretty sure he doesnt hate red.

Wow loved the story!
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intresting

I'm crying. Not a lot, but my throat's tight and I just sobbed a bit. That was so . . . so . . . *sobs* sad. I litarally sobbed there. I was listening to the song "The Little Things YOu Give Away", by Linkin Park and the main refiran is "All you've ever wanted is someone to look up to you". I thinkl that may have been the icing on the cake of emotions being altered by awesome people. And I still have that feeling in my throat . . .

I feel so /pathetic/. But, writing always makes me sad. Especially amazing writing. I do love this.

I didn't know there was more Fang . . . Cans I sees it?

I love how this turned out . . . it's chilling, almost and I'm sure JP couldn't have done it better, then again, his editers are the only thing keeping him from writing /Sues/, for God's sake!

But, back to the complimenting you. You deserve it. =). Lovely fic, even if lovely is the wrong adjective.

The pedantic bastard here to mention something--Val was Martinez in three but she didn't meet Alberto till five.

Wow. Is racism really such a death-by-even-vaguest-association thing around here? I don't really see how 'shades of black' is racist. Er, at all.

Anyways, just stopping by to comment before barrelling on to the end where I can review properly.

-D

OH PLEASE ANYONE BUT FANG!
(Then again, I'd rather face him than the wrath of Max.)
Please tell me you're going to do more!
You could write about Sam
or Lissa
or Anne
or ANYBODY!

These. Were. Incredible. You have a real talent for writing...I'm amazed. I. Loved. It! Keep up your writing!

AW... That was such a GREAT fanfic!! If I could find one like that everyday, I would be well off! Are you sure you're not JP?
LOVED IT!

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Jeez. Max's chapter got me hooked, Fang's chapter almost made me cry, and Iggy's is SO fitting for him!! Well, once again, I can't finish right now because I have other things to do, but I WILL get back to this, I swear!!

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I really like this so far. It is so well written and so...I dunno...fitting? It seems believable, all the little memories! I love it! I like how you got the day Iggy lost his sight, when Max met Fang, when the chip was placed in her arm, the naming of the flock...I don't know if I should believe that disclaimer...
Anyways, I would love to continue this now, but I gotta go, so I'll continue reading it later. Can't wait!!
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That's so cool! I liked Max's, and Fang's was so on charecter. You're good. I haven't gotten to the rest yyet, but I would like to hear the rest of Fang's. You did a good job.

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nice~! who's next? :3