You know, this is some pretty good ** you got here, girl. I wish that someone would take care of Marcello, if it were me, I would make death threats at him every day and tell him, "Your time will come." Maybe you need to make Flaky learn how to defend herself, learn to use a gun, learn how to make some money, and maybe even include quotes from the Godfather. Like,"Time to go to the mattreses" or "Keep your friends close and your enemies closer." What I'm saying is, she needs to learn how to fight. I'm really excited for the next chapter, and I hope you update soon.

...*disappointed*...Here I was hoping for a new chap...

Thank you!

I'm an L fan too!

Man gurl this was genial con la capital G ke chilo chapter, and I like all the similarities you found in your books with your historia ke awesome ehh:)
Has mas cuando tengas tiempo kan't wait chika, love your story tambien es muy real:)
Sinceramente: Juicebee:)
Flaky chola chavo! XD cool

Yay! You updated!

Hey, i like it so far please write more dont leave the story and the fans waiting.

Hey girl hey, well I simply loved this chappy cuz me y mi hainas talk haci and it reminded me of them, I love mis girls.
OMG I love that book, Speak I've read it so many times^^
I wanna know what happes next and I can't wait for your next update will be looking foward to it:)
Signed: Juicebee:)

Wow, I wonder what happens next.

Wow, I've never realized that her uncle was so mean to her.

Esta historia es genial guaw, Flaky as a chola can't belive it:), I love this story because you have done something different, it was one of the greatest stories I've evur read and I can't wait for the next chapter:)
Signed:Juicebee:)