Please update this? I want to see the next chapter! LOL

I really like this so far, i hope you update.

Interesting character development and story. Nice work so far.

Write more! You must write more! I love your version of Sarah and Jareth! Please, continue! You're slightly evil for leaving it a cliffy for this long!
I hope the muse bites you!

Love this. Your Jareth is the best interpretation I've seen in a while- not an outright nemesis, but arrogant, intimidating, sexy, and deliciously deviant. Hope to read the rest someday!

I'm loving this fic! I can't wait to see more. Update soon!

Great story so far! I can't wait to see if Sarah actually manages to escape her bindings and Jareth's reaction if she does.
Mich

I guess if we weren't sure before then now there can be no doubt. Jareth is ebil. Ebil I say!

Very nice chapter. I had forgotten about this story until the update message, and I was like, "What is that?", and then I remembered and was so excited that this is the story that was updated!
There's this aura about this story that I'm really enjoying, sort of a Before Sunrise/Before Sunset (do you know those movies?) type of thing, with this current focus on conversation over action. And your characterizations are interesting and believable.

Nice job. It's interesting and unique. Hope we don't have to wait too long for an update!

Btw, if you still need a beta, although you've done very well without one, I'd be happy to help.

Thanks for sharing!)

I really love this fic. You make Sarah and Jareth dynamic and not just put into their usual stereotype. They just feel more real and natural, I like how you tell the difference between their choice of speech and not Jareth speaking unnaturally "could not instead of couldn't" and so on. I also, like how you have the element of that he can be mean, that he is not always good. I think people get carried away and don't remember that there's two sides to the coin (good and bad) and that you can put into different degrees. I like how you pointed out Jareth's flaws and how he doesn't have a lot of experience with people and also just calling him a "unique being" because that's what he always seemed to be in my opinion something completely his own. I really like your style; I like how you end each chapter and your description.
Actually, I am shocked that there aren't more reviewing (this is like the movie, underrated at it's time), I think it’s good and a nice change from all the overly fanciful, arguing all the time. I like how there are no great rants over Sarah's rejection, that they discussed it without making a scene. I also like how Jareth just left her there, it's a bit funny and harsh at the same time but I could see him doing that. Reminds me of movie "The Linguini Incident", a character, Lucy, was doing a Houdini trick and got herself stuck being handcuffed, it's a comedy. :P Anyway, great chapter, I like how they're flowing together and can't wait for more.

hm, sorry that pm didn't work but i'm still open to beta if you need me. and if this is that slightly different direction you were talking about, i like it :P this is exactly the same kind of stuff me and my bf do so please continue. it was all very well written, plenty of detail and i look forward to more!

A good chapter!

please don't abandon this! i'm in love!

I could beta for you.

Update soon. You should try making the lemon scenes more detailed. Thanks.