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NobleBrokenBeauty
2009-12-30 . chapter 1
I kind of freaking love you. I don't think I've shipped Yuffietine this much in my life. This story is amazing. And you are my hero. XD

NBB
JigokuYume
2009-12-25 . chapter 1
Heheh I was amused by your fanfic. I adore Yuffie with Vincent. Favoriting this one :D
mom calling
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
A mighty good romp. I still don't know what the nutty guy thought he saw in Vincent's hair, but his reality isn't important except to get all of them tangled in each other just in time for their friends to show up--Cid's not going to let this die, either. Fodder for a long time, oh yeah. Thanks for this--it was fun. mc
rikku247
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
This was a very cute story. Vincent and Yuffie in jail with a crazy guy. *rolls on floor laughing* I loved it!
S.Zix
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
Since I was already wanting to reread parts of Strong, Silent Type, I decided to read something else you've written instead.

And, you know, I'm glad I did. Because I enjoyed this. The entire scenario seemed plausible, and the Vincent characterization was fantastic. I'm always weary about humor with Vincent. They just don't mesh in my head, but this came out rather well. Even the screaming, which made me tilt my head to the side a bit all fuzzy-like to make it work. But it came out just fine in the end.

Normally, I would freak out about the heavy dialogue and no prose, but it didn't bother me so much since each line of speech came pretty packed with emotion and meaning. I will say that a bit more could have helped with the comedic timing a bit. Draw out the pause before the punch line by describing something or some such. (Like I know what I'm talking about.)

I will say that I really love non-linear stories. This handled that fantastically; it all cummulated with dual climaxes. Nice.

And it was funny of course. I enjoyed the beating of Vincent like a rug because old ladies do it in particular.

Thanks again for writing.
Sienna03
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
Yay, Vincent/ Yuffie fluff! Very cute and very well-paced. Great job!
horse.dog.lotr.fantasy.girl
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
PMSL! this was hilarious! i was laughing so hard! this situation was just...just...awesome! amazing idea! i loved this well done! possibly one of the best Yuffentines ever written!
Chaos Sparda
2009-04-21 . chapter 1
I loved the hilarity of the situation. You're a great writer and I'm sad to say I've only read one other of your stories. I intend to remedy that :D
happie-day
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
LOL! Though I can't help but feel a little intimidated by the "random-ass hobo", he's kinda creepy, but a good addition nonetheless.
The Genesis Awards
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
I am extraordinarily pleased to inform you that your story, Guilt By Association, has been nominated for The Genesis Awards Best Humour Category. The Genesis Awards exists to reward the authors of FFVII fanfiction that show a certain standard of grammar and formatting, relevance to canon and characterization. Your story was nominated by NRGburst and passed to the judging rounds because of the quality your story possesses. On April 15th, the Shortlisting for the Genesis Awards will take place, and on June 15th the final results will be tallied and posted.

If you have any questions or comments, please visit our Fan Fiction Net Profile or The Genesis Awards forum.

Congratulations, and good luck.
Best Regards,

Sai, Co-Admin of The Genesis Awards
Pan Tech
2009-01-28 . chapter 1
Lol this story is pretty damn hilarious! I'm so glad I was recommended it by Mystic! Seriously, you have a great style and you certainly hit a funny bone with this.
koalababay
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
hahahah this story was hilarious! i think i really like your writing style!! ;) *adds to faves*
Sylla
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
I burst out laughing when the crazy hobo guy tackled them and then their friends all walk in. That was just too funny. XD Must've been a pretty strange day for Rufus, too.

Also, the ending made me squee. :D
WretchedOne
2008-11-30 . chapter 1
"On the one hand, he had problems communicating with people (Yuffie liked to call him socially retarded), so being intimidating was the best way to keep others away from him. That way, he never had to deal with awkward situations like the one he was in now. "

I must review this story, not because it was somewhat amusing, but because of those lines I've quoted above. They express exactly how I felt and acted when I was 15. I didn't know how to relate to the people in my life and didn't really like to be around people, and besides I loved them so much that I didn't want them to have to be hurt or upset because of me, and so I tried to be as ornery and annoying as I could so that no one would want to be around me. (It didn't really work.) It seems that the more I read about Vincent, and Yuffie as well, the more I see myself in their reflections, until I feel like I could find a place under their skin where I fit. Thank you so much for making me feel that much closer to the breathtaking character that is Vincent Valentine.

I don't know if I articulated that properly. I hope so, because those lines really sparked feeling in me. My love to you, and I hope you understand.

-Naomi
VeelaChic
2008-08-27 . chapter 1
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Vincent peeved is hilarious.
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