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Reviews For: Parables of the Bible: Abram's Call

Nightcrawlerlover
2008-07-13
ch 14,
abuseGreat job! And I think you should bring Araton, Soterasiel and Thana back.
Keep up your phenomenal writing!
Nightcrawlerlover
2008-07-03
ch 13,
abuseOh, wow. Keep up your phenomenal writing!
Nightcrawlerlover
2008-06-30
ch 12,
abuseWow. It's a good thing Abimelech did not go near or touch Sarah in any way.
Keep up your phenomenal writing!
Leishy-lou-02
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abusethats funny. very well done :)
Nightcrawlerlover
2008-06-24
ch 11,
abuseVery ingenious! Keep up your lovely writing!
yodeladyhoo
2008-06-05
ch 10,
abuseI love the frame of Moses that you write in. Reminds me of a very short (500 words or less) story by Issac Asimov. I think it was called In The Beginning. It's a conversation between Moses and Aaron.

Until again.
yodeladyhoo
2008-05-14
ch 9,
abuseSo, are you going to write in Sarah's response, or was that it?

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yodeladyhoo
2008-05-14
ch 8,
abuseIt was not unusual in those times to have more than one wife, especially for the not yet Jewish nation. Polygomy, although not widely touted is there in the Bible, and not only in the the story of Abraham. Look to Abraham's grandson, Jacob with both Leah and Rachel. Why would Abram have issues with 'laying' with Hagar?

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Elemental Magican
2008-04-13
ch 3, anon.
abuseI love the parts between God and Moses.
Ajac
2008-04-11
ch 3,
abuseOnce again, the Lord issues forth words of wisdom. And you're still as great an author as ever! Keep up the faith and good work!
yodeladyhoo
2008-04-08
ch 3,
abuseIt's a good thing Moses was interrupted at that point, otherwise Matthew (I think) would be plagerizing!

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yodeladyhoo
2008-04-08
ch 2,
abuseIs Keturah that wife that Sarah kicked out when she gave birth to Isaac in fear that Abraham might love Keturah's son more than Isaac and who's son is credited as being the Patriarch of Islam?

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A.Minister
2008-04-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseAs long as you didn't insult God...:)
yodeladyhoo
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuse**snort**

Part of the job description--

Excellent!

Until again.
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