awesome, but sad...

Yay another chappie!!...well...half a chappie! Yay! I've been staring at this story waiting for it to update...keep up the awesome work!

Nice... a bit confusing but nice... and nice to see that you've posted again... I have blocks of all kinds plus business stopping me... and my stories a year old now... but I have the next chapter half done.

whoever knew Kurama was a perv?

DIE FARIES,DIE!I likers how this story is goin.

NO!NOT THE KOOL AID!OH YEAH!

FIGHT THE FARIES!

Words cannot describe the gratitude that I feel for finding an author who shares the love of both Hiei and Kurama. I love the idea of pairing both bishounen with an OC. I would love to see the three of them work it out in the end with both of the guys being her mates. As you've been updating, I've noticed your spelling errors are diminishing. Great job! This story has a nice reading flow to it and your OC is very cool while at the same time very realistic with her feelings and actions. My only suggestion is with long thought paragraphs, break it up into smaller paragraphs or describe the person doing something while thinking so it's not just one massive paragraph of thought. Great story and please update soon. I really love this story and want to read more! ^_^

its great so far please update it soon.

O! She's going to challenge the panthers! Well, she thinks she's just challenging some cat tribe. I wonder how they will treat the princess who had the mercy of keeping her alive verses killing her. I mean, the princess can't be all bad if she halted everyone's plan of killing her to simply removing her demon blood... Allowing Jade an option to live as a human instead, thus protected under demon law, it almost seems flawless that it would not harm the girl, but she seriously error-ed if she thought the potential mates of Jade, two powerful young A-class demons, would just give in like that. While her idea was nice, she's not very bright. She's a simpleton, a kind simpleton. And that is what's probably gonna get her killed this time around.
The only reason Jade would remain a threat was if her father was some son of the lord, maybe a second son, and so unimportant for the throne, so they could easily kill him with no reprisal or harm to their tribe. But maybe the heir died, and with no other surviving sons, the throne would pass to the next son, who had been put down for loving a human and conceiving a child. That child would be the logical heir to the throne, even over the sister, who was now princess, (which may have been the cause of the sister's reluctance to slay her own kin). With the demon blood removed, she was no longer a threat to the throne, and the princess could reign. Well, if this happens to run true to your plot, (it may or may not. I have no clue. I'm just thinking) then the panther demon tribe effectively bit their own tails off. Ending their own rightful hereditary line by killing that son. If I happen to be correct in these musing I am horribly appallingly sorry for uncovering your plot!
I love your writing, and I think you're doing great! I'm glad you updated again, because I really like this story. I was afriad you were beginning to lose interest in writing it. So what if we know the plot? All the stories in the world have already been told, we just find new ways to tell them, what makes them enjoyable is watching everything play out as we think it shall.
Of course, we enjoy new surprises and unexpected events too!

Love it! update soon! ^_^

Hey hey! I'm assuming this is the story you wanted me to look at? There are some typos, and Genkai's name is misspelled... hehe, so if you want to email me your chapters, I'll gladly look 'em over for you. ^^ My email's on my profile (at least, it should be).

update

aww... almost done? oh well... not really a lot to say about this... good work so far though... can't wait to see the end.

Honestly in the beginning I wasn't too into this story, but as I kept reading I found that I really wanted to see how things played out, and its turning out really good. I find that I cant wait for the next chapter. :]

Keep up the good work.

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