This is a really cute story and I loved it, but I think you should try to keep your sentences shorter. They are a bit long, however this has been written a long time ago so you've probably improved by now :P

Adorable! (:

I know you wrote this forever ago, but it's just about the cutest thing I've ever read. Ever. It's adorable.

Very gentle and warm!

I like the way you wrote this because it says that you are expanding as an author. Is it a stream of consciousness kind of thing? I would say you should refine it a little so it flows more, but that's all I would say about it. I kind of like how you aged him too, you would make him more mature sounding as he got older which reminds me of The portrait of and artist a young man.

Beautiful! It ties very well into canon and contains all the little whatsits of boys and girls growing up, especially in this case. It shows a kind of innocence that hasn't been lost over the years and, to sum it all up, it's completely fantastic.

ADORABLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

Whenever I'm upset or bored, I love reading your stories. They're always like a breath of fresh air. Especially the KibaSaku ones, because there aren't many of them, and yours are written brilliantly andand-

OMG, THIS IS MY NEW FAVORITE ONE-SHOT!

You made Sakura and Kiba so innocent, lovable, and like they were practically MADE for each other -which they kinda are- and I'm in love with this. I could, legit, feel the love and emotions radiating from the words.

Splendid job, Annie. Seriously, your stories are great!

OH AUTHOR OF THIS REALLY HEARTWARMING STORY THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS IT WARMED MY INSIDES IN A GOOD YOU!

Gorgeous! The style was a little difficult to get used to at first, but once I got situated, it had a very nice flow. Love this pairing! I'm not huge Kiba/Sakura fan, but I love to read a good piece. :)

This was amazing and beautiful and you made me cry.

I absolutely hate run-on sentences. But this was just so perfect! You really did a good job of putting it all together; not many people can do it so well _

I just loved how Kiba expressed himself and his thoughts. I really liked this version Kiba :D It was absolutely adorable and cute as to how he viewed her and was always there for her.

I'm glad I read this though :3 I just can't tell you how much I enjoyed the story and especially how it was written. That was definitely the icing on the cake xD

Please continue the work. Great job

ACK, okay, I'm on a KibaSaku rampage. I find this absolutely adorable, and now I'm going to ravage your other stories. :-bd

Bella

I hardly review; which I know is a very bad habit because there are so many amazing authors on this site who rightly deserve to read about how amazing their stories are. I found that I simply didn't have the heart to click on the return arrow without giving you some input. I absolutely loved your story; from the run-on sentences to the way Kiba sees Sakura. I felt as though the run-on sentences were fitting. It's like a thought without pause, a build-up without governing laws. It's perfect in every sense.

I, uh, sort of, er, have a crush on Kiba and I like your Kiba a lot, rrrright. And how she is magic and he knows or not but still think about it, sometimes. And really, like, make you feel (... okaish, shoot me), and they're so real that you can't believe it, but you like it, and you wanna cry and laugh and hey, and Naruto, and she being in love with her teammates (a little bit, or something), and then she isn't, and Kiba and all her secrets.

So. -Blink- It's, err, great. :3

Awwwwwwwwwwwww.