Oh my gosh!! That's so cute! I love pokeshipping stories...

What attracted me the most about this story was how it’s more unique and raw than typical romance fics. What I mean is the way you wrote this story lacks the typical cliche frills and lovey-dovey mush typical Pokeshippy stories harbor. I loved the allusion you made to Misty being “famished,” whereas sappier romances would have used flowery language like “longing.” This fic is a bit more realistic and creative, especially regarding what/whom Misty is REALLY famished over. The semi-Egoshipping was a good touch, especially how Gary’s proposal guarantees Misty a prestigious life. Yet, glamour is obviously not what Misty craves. I’m so happy this story did not turn into a typical Pokeshippy mushfest, and ended quite fittingly without falling into a loftier “happily ever after.” It’s good to find more down-to-earth Pokeshippy romance fanfics.

LOVELY.

That was simply fantastic! I really enjoyed it!

That was so cute! I loved it! Keep writing AAML!

That was truly amazing! I love your AAML stories, they're so...human. Realistic!
^_^

omgomgomg! I love it. Ash and Misty forever!

LOVED IT! Am now going to go read anything else ou hae written. Gorgeous.

WOW! I loved the story completely. Not to mention, Misty's my kinda girl, Outback Steakhouse and a hamburger are both extrememly romantic in my eyes. I did notice a few errors, third paragraph up you describe Misty's 'bear shoulders' as opposed to her bare shoulders (and one is considerably more sexy then the other). And... actually I think thats it. I thought I noticed an improper use of the word naught but now I cant find it so Im gonna assume its not there. In any event, really sentimental story with a killer ending.

One word, amazing, it is so well written, and the plot was so nice, so close to reality. Your knowledge of human emotions and thinking was so damn accurate, I mean I can't stop babbling like a nerd. Truely amazing.

I have to admit that atleast I couldn't find anything wrong with it.

That's one of the best oneshots I've EVER read! Fabulous, simple yet sweet. It was great!

I loved how you developed their characters so well in such a small oneshot and the irony from the beginning to the end. No grammer mistakes at all and no spelling errors either. Well done! Well, that sure made my day. Haha nice oneshot I hope you don't mind if I browsed through your other stories lol. Cya later... (via reviews of your other stories)

-lolz- That was awesome. Irony I'm having hamburgers for lunch. XD Great story.

that was cute.

That's awesome ^_^ Love it~