Aw, ShinionRolf! Cute! Shinion was very in character here, a good mix of sarcasm and his trademark asshole!ness with a touch of indulgence for Rolf. Rolf was also quite well done. Though, the use of "their" to refer to Rolf didn't really work, I assume you were trying to avoid the overuse of the pronoun "he" that tends to come up with male/male stories, but in this case it was more confusing and jarring than anything.

Anyways, the overall flow and content of the fic is really good. Very cute.

OMG, I felt like I was the only one who loves Shinon x Rolf! :3 I haven't found ANYTHING except this one, and it was GOOD too :D Thank you so much

I adore this couple, and I was glad to find a fic about it, but there were tons of mistakes. You continually used 'their' instead of 'him' or 'his' in place of Rolf...? I was confused throughout the whole story; I thought Shinon was addressing and touching two separate people. There were missed words which you could have easily found, but your vocabulary was nice. I found Shinon to be a bit out of character, as I can't see him kissing Rolf so easily without giving him some grief over it. Rolf was pretty IC, but I did like the story regardless of what my rant points towards, and I'd love to see more of them from you.

Please write more ShinonRolf? It's such a rare pairing and I was overjoyed to find a fic about them~! X3

Eheeheeheehee! That was GREAT! I want more! Don't usually read Rolf/Shinon but that was just GREAT!