Android 16 is actually my favorite Android. I know he didn't have much time on DBZ, but then again neither did 17. It wasn't until GT that 17 really got a lot of airtime. But, still Android 16 deserves at least more fanfics considering he was the one who caused Gohan to go apeshit on Cell.

I'm rambling. 17 sucks and I'm glad you ended it the way you did. Great story!

Good story, 16 is my favourite android. It was an unexpexted ending, though. But it made sense. It shows how the cell saga could have gone differently by one decision. I'd like to write a sequal to that maybe, if i had permission. Or if not you could write it. Just a thought.

Very cool! I like how you portrayed Jurokugou's humanity. Keep it up.

We have a word in Texas for these types of fics... "Awesome".

Heh, if you ask me, 17 got what was coming to him... and besides, he could barely touch Cell's first form, and 16 beat the hell out of the mantis-looking android, 17 would have been a sinch.

Plus, you have a bit of 16x18 in here, and I enjooy that, especially considering how many years it's been since I've seen that pairing, but then again, this is an old fic, so yeah...

Nice work my friend, and thanks for the walk down memory lane.

Love, Peace, Chicken Grease!

JayManney4Life

I will not say "Seventeen shoulda won", because in this point in the series, 16 and Cell are of equal strength, and stronger by far, then the cyborg twins. I will say that Sixteen, in the end, probably wouldn't have killed 17, because as you might remember, he made a big speech to the two cyborgs (though 17 mighta been in Cell at da time) about how he cared about them and enjoyed being with them.
WHat I will say. It was good, but as I said, out of character on 16's part. Excellent work.

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Wow, I sound so mature...

Very good. I love these kind of stories. Androids are my favourite. I love all three of them. In fact, they are the ONLY reason I watch DBZ. Otherwise, it would really suck.

Go 16!That was pretty cool.

Hmmm. I rarely review at all, much less the same author twice, but you... you intrigue me. You say so much with so little, and you do the strangest things with characters that oddly make sense. I'm impressed. Keep it up.

Very interesting fic, the characterization of 16 was excellent. Bratty 17 was well done too, and I liked the bit about the sombrero. A great fic!-Strife

Pretty cool. and 16 WAS a hell of a lot stronger than 17 anyway. Of course, now Cell is screwed huh? No perfect form!

*stares at screen in surprise* Well, this is definitely a new concept, I think. Although I really do like 17, I'm not exactly upset over what happened. *shrugs, then smiles* So... Are you going to add anything to this, or is it just a one-shot? *raises an eyebrow* I think a continuation of a some sort would be interesting. You did great, regardless to whether you continue or not! _