I'm impressed and it takes alot for me to become impressed so congrats. Though you better believe it when I say you better have a new chapter too.

O.M.G ! Me loves it :) please write more :D

Marty Awsome Charicter

Carmen Awsome charicter

Marty Carmen OMG THE GREATEST PAIR EVER lol

Keep On Keeping On Rocking ( And Writing )

xx Lu-Lu xx

omg i loved it, it was intense

please write more

i like it please continue :D

wow! beautiful story - I can a really good charactor developing here - keep it up! it will be interesting to see if you continue with her.

a few Gramatical errors though tut tut :)