O.M.G ! Me loves it :) please write more :D

Marty = Awsome Charicter
Carmen =Awsome charicter

Marty + Carmen = OMG THE GREATEST PAIR EVER lol

Keep On Keeping On Rocking ( And Writing )

xx Lu-Lu xx

omg i loved it, it was intense
please write more

i like it please continue :D

wow! beautiful story - I can a really good charactor developing here - keep it up!! it will be interesting to see if you continue with her.

a few Gramatical errors though tut tut :)